是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-08-31 20:45:06 Post subject: 文字的难堪 |
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幻想的浪漫
飞过江南的一片天
难以网住的心
矗立在象是雕塑的岸边
久别的蓝天
只能享受着一望无际的草原
白云的笑脸
在那儿回报着你深情的陪伴
又一个季节过去的时候
没有人提醒你忘记昨天
风带走了的
是抓不住的一去不复还
万语千言的从前
写不出今天一无所有的伤感
诗还活着
让文字选择着难堪 |
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曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-08-31 22:02:10 Post subject: |
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【诗还活着 让文字选择着难堪】 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-01 03:17:32 Post subject: |
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萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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苏茉儿 秀才
Joined: 31 Dec 2007 Posts: 739
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Posted: 2008-09-01 07:35:47 Post subject: |
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有缘兄,好久不见了。。。还好不呀。问好。这诗很伤感呢。。。 _________________ 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。 |
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苏茉儿 秀才
Joined: 31 Dec 2007 Posts: 739
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Posted: 2008-09-01 07:37:46 Post subject: |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。 |
哎呀,赌钱去了吧?嗯,输太多了。。。想必。。。哈哈。。 _________________ 默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。 |
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点点儿 秀才
Joined: 12 Jan 2008 Posts: 413 Location: 眇小的地球 点点儿Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-01 14:26:39 Post subject: |
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诗还活着,让诗人相视着难堪`
。。。。 _________________ ---其实你永远不懂我的心--- |
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点点儿 秀才
Joined: 12 Jan 2008 Posts: 413 Location: 眇小的地球 点点儿Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-01 14:28:31 Post subject: 洗手不干~ |
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一无所有最好, 心不会被腐蚀。 _________________ ---其实你永远不懂我的心--- |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-01 16:18:41 Post subject: 洗手不干时,顺便洗洗钱! |
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點點兒 wrote: |
一無所有最好, 心不會被腐蝕。 |
_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-01 16:19:47 Post subject: 从来不赌钱呢,我只负责赢! |
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蘇茉兒 wrote: |
詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。 |
哎呀,賭錢去了吧?嗯,輸太多了。。。想必。。。哈哈。。 |
_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-02 11:03:41 Post subject: |
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后两段好,前两段字面上好像有些不接 |
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Lake 举人

Joined: 09 Jan 2007 Posts: 1286
LakeCollection |
Posted: 2008-09-03 08:44:04 Post subject: |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。 |
还有半生, 尚须努力! _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-03 11:02:43 Post subject: 等你到了半生的位置,你就会知道:人,只有半生可以努力。 |
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Lake wrote: |
詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。 |
還有半生, 尚須努力! |
_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-09-08 21:08:03 Post subject: |
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曲元奇 wrote: |
【诗还活着 让文字选择着难堪】 |
呵呵,诗是不轻松 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-08 21:10:43 Post subject: |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。 |
秋声如风
不是落叶的错 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-09-08 21:13:26 Post subject: |
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苏茉儿 wrote: |
有缘兄,好久不见了。。。还好不呀。问好。这诗很伤感呢。。。 |
茉儿好。。。
秋天了,不知写什么好。写一两句话,也选不到好听的词。 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-09-08 21:15:23 Post subject: |
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点点儿 wrote: |
诗还活着,让诗人相视着难堪`
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不视,也许不难堪? |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
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Posted: 2008-09-08 21:16:52 Post subject: |
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悠子 wrote: |
后两段好,前两段字面上好像有些不接 |
是的,找不到合适的词,只好胡言乱语。 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-09 05:18:29 Post subject: 哈,胡言乱语,算我一个 |
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是有缘 wrote: |
悠子 wrote: |
后两段好,前两段字面上好像有些不接 |
是的,找不到合适的词,只好胡言乱语。 |
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东江湖主 秀才
Joined: 10 Aug 2008 Posts: 115
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Posted: 2008-09-11 05:49:19 Post subject: |
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诗还活着
让文字选择着难堪 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-12 06:11:32 Post subject: |
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东江湖主 wrote: |
诗还活着
让文字选择着难堪 |
不做海子,不做顾城
只把排列的文字
当作一刻的游戏 |
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