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文字的难堪
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 20:45:06    Post subject: 文字的难堪 Reply with quote

幻想的浪漫
飞过江南的一片天
难以网住的心
矗立在象是雕塑的岸边

久别的蓝天
只能享受着一望无际的草原
白云的笑脸
在那儿回报着你深情的陪伴

又一个季节过去的时候
没有人提醒你忘记昨天
风带走了的
是抓不住的一去不复还

万语千言的从前
写不出今天一无所有的伤感
诗还活着
让文字选择着难堪
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 22:02:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

【诗还活着 让文字选择着难堪】
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PostPosted: 2008-09-01 03:17:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-01 07:35:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

有缘兄,好久不见了。。。还好不呀。问好。这诗很伤感呢。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-01 07:37:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。


哎呀,赌钱去了吧?嗯,输太多了。。。想必。。。哈哈。。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-01 14:26:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗还活着,让诗人相视着难堪`

。。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-01 14:28:31    Post subject: 洗手不干~ Reply with quote

一无所有最好, 心不会被腐蚀。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-01 16:18:41    Post subject: 洗手不干时,顺便洗洗钱! Reply with quote

點點兒 wrote:
一無所有最好, 心不會被腐蝕。

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PostPosted: 2008-09-01 16:19:47    Post subject: 从来不赌钱呢,我只负责赢! Reply with quote

蘇茉兒 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。


哎呀,賭錢去了吧?嗯,輸太多了。。。想必。。。哈哈。。

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PostPosted: 2008-09-02 11:03:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

后两段好,前两段字面上好像有些不接
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PostPosted: 2008-09-03 08:44:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。


还有半生, 尚须努力!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-03 11:02:43    Post subject: 等你到了半生的位置,你就会知道:人,只有半生可以努力。 Reply with quote

Lake wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。


還有半生, 尚須努力!

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PostPosted: 2008-09-08 21:08:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

曲元奇 wrote:
【诗还活着 让文字选择着难堪】


呵呵,诗是不轻松
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PostPosted: 2008-09-08 21:10:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
萬語千言的從前,寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。


秋声如风
不是落叶的错
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PostPosted: 2008-09-08 21:13:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
有缘兄,好久不见了。。。还好不呀。问好。这诗很伤感呢。。。


茉儿好。。。

秋天了,不知写什么好。写一两句话,也选不到好听的词。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-08 21:15:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

点点儿 wrote:
诗还活着,让诗人相视着难堪`

。。。。


不视,也许不难堪?
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PostPosted: 2008-09-08 21:16:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
后两段好,前两段字面上好像有些不接


是的,找不到合适的词,只好胡言乱语。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-09 05:18:29    Post subject: 哈,胡言乱语,算我一个 Reply with quote

是有缘 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
后两段好,前两段字面上好像有些不接


是的,找不到合适的词,只好胡言乱语。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-11 05:49:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗还活着
让文字选择着难堪
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PostPosted: 2008-09-12 06:11:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

东江湖主 wrote:
诗还活着
让文字选择着难堪


不做海子,不做顾城
只把排列的文字
当作一刻的游戏
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