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文字的难堪

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Posted: 2008-08-31 20:45:06 Post subject: 文字的难堪

幻想的浪漫飞过江南的一片天难以网住的心矗立在象是雕塑的岸边久别的蓝天只能享受着一望无际的草原白云的笑脸在那儿回报着你深情的陪伴又一个季节过去的时候没有人提醒你忘记昨天风带走了的是抓不住的一去不复还万语千言的从前写不出今天一无所有的伤感诗还活着让文字选择着难堪

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Posted: 2008-08-31 22:02:10 Post subject:

【诗还活着让文字选择着难堪】

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Posted: 2008-09-01 03:17:32 Post subject:

萬語千言的從前，寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-09-01 07:35:47 Post subject:

有缘兄，好久不见了。。。还好不呀。问好。这诗很伤感呢。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-09-01 07:37:46 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

萬語千言的從前，寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。

哎呀，赌钱去了吧？嗯，输太多了。。。想必。。。哈哈。。
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Posted: 2008-09-01 14:26:39 Post subject:

诗还活着，让诗人相视着难堪｀。。。。 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-09-01 14:28:31 Post subject: 洗手不干～

一无所有最好，心不会被腐蚀。 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-09-01 16:18:41 Post subject: 洗手不干时，顺便洗洗钱！

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一無所有最好，心不會被腐蝕。

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Posted: 2008-09-01 16:19:47 Post subject: 从来不赌钱呢，我只负责赢！

蘇茉兒 wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

萬語千言的從前，寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。

哎呀，賭錢去了吧？嗯，輸太多了。。。想必。。。哈哈。。

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Posted: 2008-09-02 11:03:41 Post subject:

后两段好，前两段字面上好像有些不接

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Posted: 2008-09-03 08:44:04 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

萬語千言的從前，寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。

还有半生, 尚须努力!
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Posted: 2008-09-03 11:02:43 Post subject: 等你到了半生的位置，你就会知道：人，只有半生可以努力。

Lake wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

萬語千言的從前，寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。

還有半生, 尚須努力!

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Posted: 2008-09-08 21:08:03 Post subject:

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【诗还活着让文字选择着难堪】

呵呵，诗是不轻松

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Posted: 2008-09-08 21:10:43 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

萬語千言的從前，寫不出今日一無所有的難堪。詩盜半生寫照。

秋声如风
不是落叶的错

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Posted: 2008-09-08 21:13:26 Post subject:

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有缘兄，好久不见了。。。还好不呀。问好。这诗很伤感呢。。。

茉儿好。。。

秋天了，不知写什么好。写一两句话，也选不到好听的词。

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Posted: 2008-09-08 21:15:23 Post subject:

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诗还活着，让诗人相视着难堪｀

。。。。

不视，也许不难堪？

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Posted: 2008-09-08 21:16:52 Post subject:

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后两段好，前两段字面上好像有些不接

是的，找不到合适的词，只好胡言乱语。

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Posted: 2008-09-09 05:18:29 Post subject: 哈，胡言乱语，算我一个

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悠子 wrote:

后两段好，前两段字面上好像有些不接

是的，找不到合适的词，只好胡言乱语。

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Posted: 2008-09-11 05:49:19 Post subject:

诗还活着让文字选择着难堪

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Posted: 2008-09-12 06:11:32 Post subject:

东江湖主 wrote:

诗还活着
让文字选择着难堪

不做海子，不做顾城
只把排列的文字
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