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思(组诗)
Holybolt
秀才


Joined: 27 Feb 2008
Posts: 110
Location: China
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PostPosted: 2008-08-17 05:34:45    Post subject: 思(组诗) Reply with quote

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果园里的夜晚
挂满湿润的星星
我的体内寸草不生

遗忘的角落
是否可以被种植
用悲悯的泪

想看到生机
就要放下原罪
原罪在我的血液里

无法剔除的
可否经历一次淬火
燃烧,然后浸泡

2
认为正确的
或许就是错误的
认为错误的
也许是正确的
就像辨别死亡和诞生
辨别已摒弃的和已继承的

风在气候里改变方向
能否说它选择的对与错
道路越来越崎岖
人们迷失在愿望里
可还要前行
还要把接下来的生活过完

把一份情景带到现实里
去敲打和洗涤
就这样安排
在一个忽然到来的季节里
把自己浸湿
然后拧干

3
生活沉浸下来
涛声熄灭在冥想里
一切都恢复了平静
以另一种姿态

风把体内的潮水推向岸边
我无法上岸
无法面对阳光里的火焰
这是否可以把思想
停留在月色里
去降临一场雨

雨水束缚了脚步
对于心跳,是否能唤醒黎明
身体越来越沉重
所有的心事都装在呼吸里

期待的日子就要来临
我放慢想象的速度

接下来需要反思
要点燃踩踏过的稻草
它的香气飘散在道路上
召唤黑夜里的醒者

4
白毛巾和红旗
一同搭在洗衣绳上
之间的距离只有一个念头

此刻仍在下雨
阳光在未来的日子
刺痛了紧闭的眼睛

如果可以倾听
就能感觉到指针掀起的风暴
这声音震动了一扇窗
窗棂是用肩胛骨做的
一头扛着山
一头挑着河

室内的菊花在七楼的阳台上
它的高度和半山腰的小草一样
可它体验不到吹拂和雨打
只多了一份柔情

这样的脆弱
应以怎样的姿态表达
站在雪地上
对寒冷说
我明了了
一切都将溶化

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赵福治
探花


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Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2008-08-17 17:46:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

风在气候里改变方向
能否说它选择的对与错
................状态不错。
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杨海军
进士出身


Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-08-18 16:30:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有质感 的诗!!!!
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寒轩笔
童生


Joined: 07 Aug 2008
Posts: 21
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PostPosted: 2008-08-19 01:36:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

在一个忽然到来的季节里
把自己浸湿
然后拧干
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