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你在我亲近的想象内

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Posted: 2008-08-11 05:38:14 Post subject: 你在我亲近的想象内

你在我亲近的想象内把我的牙齿放在你的牙齿上放在你冰冷的齿间　放在你渐渐僵硬的舌尖今天，异域的城邦阴雨绵绵我的心灵　　水中浸泡多汁的心灵和你相遇　　.优雅地绽放只是　想象的谷峰我永远都抵达不了正如　你有力的手怎么也扼不到我纤细的脖颈窗前的马蹄莲　　呜呜咽咽我们相互站在对方时间的角落十指紧扣　飞扬的芦花不是你我的初衷徒然　眺望　模糊的海岸线你在我亲近的想象内遥远的笛声和风琴共鸣山坡上　　你的玫瑰不远马匹不远　只是　你太远 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-08-11 06:25:16 Post subject:

亲近想象，很好！

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Posted: 2008-08-11 18:58:49 Post subject:

想象的谷峰我永远都抵达不了

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Posted: 2008-08-12 08:52:44 Post subject:

琼裙诗歌，总有微凉的锋利带领我们抵达内心和灵魂

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Posted: 2008-08-12 16:31:20 Post subject:

琼裙诗歌，总有微凉的锋利带领我们抵达内心和灵魂准确！山坡上　　你的玫瑰不远马匹不远　只是　你太远 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-08-12 16:55:58 Post subject:

马匹不远　只是　你太远问好阿依琼裙！

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Posted: 2008-08-14 06:59:16 Post subject:

朱煜国 wrote:

亲近想象，
很好！

笑～～我只能亲近想象

问好！
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Posted: 2008-08-14 07:06:30 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

想象的谷峰我永远都抵达不了 Very Happy

同样　　我抵达不了你的谷峰

谢白水！
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Posted: 2008-08-14 07:10:33 Post subject:

舒中 wrote:

琼裙诗歌，总有微凉的锋利带领我们抵达内心和灵魂

谢舒中和少君的点评！
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Posted: 2008-08-14 07:39:55 Post subject:

东江湖主 wrote:

马匹不远　只是　你太远

问好阿依琼裙！

问好东江湖主！

笑～～我做西江仙子好不好？？
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