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宏灯的诗!请审.谢谢!

尹宏灯
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Posted: 2008-08-05 02:27:23 Post subject: 宏灯的诗!请审.谢谢!

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沙漠
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Posted: 2008-08-05 21:30:08 Post subject:

目空一切然后便忘记了疼好体验！ _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

韩少君
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Posted: 2008-08-06 19:26:13 Post subject:

铁在思想。一直不停地与空气和水探讨生活它疼。生出锈有时我也生锈。好感觉！学习！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

尹宏灯
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Posted: 2008-08-06 23:16:11 Post subject:

沙漠 wrote:

目空一切
然后便忘记了疼

好体验！

宏燈問好沙漠,謝批!遠握.
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尹宏灯
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Posted: 2008-08-06 23:18:17 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

铁在思想。一直不停地
...

宏燈問好韓老師.謝點評!
握手!
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白水
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Posted: 2008-08-09 05:12:46 Post subject:

哲理, 诗意. 提

尹宏灯
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Posted: 2008-08-12 23:00:04 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哲理, 诗意. 提

宏灯问好白水,谢过点评!过远握.
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女中豪杰-四妹
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Posted: 2008-08-13 03:55:50 Post subject:

还是垂直砸在自己脚上我已准备好，足够的疼好痛痛快快上路痛过之后才能重新整装上路 _________________ 脱离躯体的灵魂游走于跳动的指尖…………

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Posted: 2008-08-13 16:35:01 Post subject:

锈铁在思想。一直不停地与空气和水探讨生活它疼。生出锈有时我也生锈。不同的是我停止思想，拒绝空气和水。目空一切然后便忘记了疼 ———————————————— 我一直在生锈

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-08-13 17:04:35 Post subject:

最后一首不错。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

东江湖主
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Posted: 2008-08-13 22:21:13 Post subject:

铁在思想。一直不停地与空气和水探讨生活它疼。生出锈欣赏！

尹宏灯
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Posted: 2008-08-15 02:24:00 Post subject:

女中豪杰-四妹 wrote:

还是垂直砸在自己脚上
...

宏灯问好!谢过点评.
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尹宏灯
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Posted: 2008-08-15 02:24:42 Post subject:

kino wrote:

锈
...

宏灯问好!
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尹宏灯
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Posted: 2008-08-15 02:26:00 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

最后一首不错。

宏灯问好冲浪.谢谢点阅.
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尹宏灯
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Posted: 2008-08-15 02:26:34 Post subject:

东江湖主 wrote:

铁在思想。一直不停地
与空气和水探讨生活
它疼。生出锈

欣赏！

宏灯问好东江湖主.远握!
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