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 Posted: 2008-07-23 18:24:46 Post subject: Fools and Dragonflies 傻瓜和蜻蜓 |
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Fools and Dragonflies
by Barrie
Drifting
into the still of the reeds,
I watch
bullrush cotton
hanging on the warm morning.
A froghop
from my face,
a curious dragonfly
tries to make sense
of a fool in a boat.
傻瓜和蜻蜓
Tr. Lake
漂
入芦苇的寂静
我观看
蒲絮
挂在温暖的清晨
面前
蛙跳之遥
一只好奇的蜻蜓
试图弄懂
船上的傻瓜
（感谢非马先生的点睛之译 - 蛙跳之遥。）
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戴玨
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| Posted: 2008-07-24 15:45:33 Post subject: |
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hanging或可翻成悬浮，盘旋。
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| Posted: 2008-07-24 18:24:21 Post subject: |
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谢谢戴玨的建议。 觉得 “悬浮 ” 好些。 当初想译成 “悬挂”，感到罗嗦了。
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| Posted: 2008-08-01 06:22:33 Post subject: |
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 觉得“hanging”或可译为“浮”，“挂”太沉了。 |
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| Posted: 2008-08-01 18:44:02 Post subject: |
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谢谢Kino 再次献计献策。
“浮”，让我想到 ‘float'. 如果英文用了'float', 倒失去了新意。
真是伤脑筋。
我也学写了一首，写不好。
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