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中华歌后----邓丽君

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Posted: 2008-07-28 20:14:06 Post subject: 中华歌后----邓丽君

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Posted: 2008-07-28 21:18:51 Post subject:

歌后歌迷温馨烂漫 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2008-07-28 22:26:02 Post subject:

赞！！

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Posted: 2008-07-29 05:16:08 Post subject:

好象写过一次了，另写的？

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Posted: 2008-07-29 17:21:00 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

歌后歌迷
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Very Happy

感谢岛主大驾光临,小店棚壁生辉.

最近一切可好?问候!
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赞！！

感谢子花阅读喜欢.
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半溪明月 wrote:

好象写过一次了，另写的？

感谢明月关注阅读.你啊,真是好记心.的确发过一次---当时只有两

节,还是觉得太简单,没有表达的东西不少,所以这次大约比较象话

一点,怎么也要对得起相拌二十几年的邓大姐啊.
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Posted: 2008-07-31 21:59:03 Post subject:

提读 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2008-08-01 00:40:59 Post subject:

整个歌手系列都精彩，这个也一样出色，贴切，读诗如听其歌，见其人。情素，情愫？ _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-08-01 21:42:06 Post subject:

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整个歌手系列都精彩，这个也一样出色，贴切，读诗如听其歌，见其人。
...

感谢老兄喜欢鼓励.嘿嘿,更感谢发现别字.
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天籁清音～～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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Posted: 2008-08-05 16:22:58 Post subject:

写得飘逸灵动，我也写过邓丽君，踏实多了。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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阿依琼裙 wrote:

天籁清音～～～

感谢阿依琼裙阅读点评.
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Posted: 2008-08-05 20:02:45 Post subject:

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写得飘逸灵动，我也写过邓丽君，踏实多了。

感谢老兄关注点评.何不把你写的邓丽君贴出来,大家也好相互借鉴

学习.如何?
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Posted: 2008-08-06 14:59:39 Post subject:

好！不过我说的“踏实”是贬义。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2008-08-06 21:50:25 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

好！不过我说的“踏实”是贬义。

个人以为:

无论何种手法,都能写出好诗来.
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