白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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 Posted: 2008-07-28 18:07:48 Post subject: 落草 |
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落草
落，一个多么有趣汉字
落荒而逃， 落发为僧，一落千丈
倒倾九天的银河呵
没人知道
你到底倾倒了多少银子
而我只在乎你待估的草标，是否
抖落
洛水之东， 洛阳之西
就是你安身之处了
叮咚的环珮并不重要
闪光的桂冠并不重要
重要的是你沉默了七七四十九天
沉默地看一条蚕吐丝
作茧
却缚不住一只扑灯的蛾子,是谁
采洛河之水
砚碎它焦黑的翅膀
悠然
作
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韩少君
进士出身
Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
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| Posted: 2008-07-28 18:20:39 Post subject: |
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好一个 落 字了得
落草即寇
落魂即空
落魄丐也
落情即魔
落 落 落
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子花
秀才
Joined: 08 Mar 2007
Posts: 722
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| Posted: 2008-07-28 22:27:53 Post subject: |
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| 起笔有意思！！好诗文！ |
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半溪明月
榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
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| Posted: 2008-07-29 05:14:24 Post subject: |
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倒倾九天的银河呵
没人知道
你到底倾倒了多少银子
而我只在乎你待估的草标，是否
抖落
白水的诗深了～ |
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溪语
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Joined: 16 Mar 2007
Posts: 509
Location: 中国恩施
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| Posted: 2008-07-29 05:55:40 Post subject: |
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落寞。
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戴永良
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Joined: 28 Aug 2007
Posts: 194
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| Posted: 2008-07-29 05:59:51 Post subject: |
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采洛河之水
砚碎它焦黑的翅膀
悠然
作诗
好.
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2008-07-29 17:50:26 Post subject: |
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| 韩少君 wrote: |
好一个 落 字了得
落草即寇
落魂即空
落魄丐也
落情即魔
落 落 落 |
哈, 好和.谢谢 
直到落得下头上的桂(草)冠, 也就写的出<洛神赋>了, 可惜,难啊  |
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白水
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Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-07-29 17:51:15 Post subject: |
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问好子花 |
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白水
大学士
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Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-07-29 17:52:54 Post subject: |
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其实很直白的,问好月亮 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2008-07-29 17:56:05 Post subject: |
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问好溪语 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2008-07-29 17:58:23 Post subject: |
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| 戴永良 wrote: |
采洛河之水
砚碎它焦黑的翅膀
悠然
作诗
好. |
谢谢理解, 问好 |
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新华
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Joined: 29 Jul 2007
Posts: 225
新华Collection |
| Posted: 2008-07-30 16:31:25 Post subject: |
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| 真的不错，真想去看看落草。问好，学习。 |
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kino
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Joined: 23 Dec 2006
Posts: 411
Location: beijing
kinoCollection |
| Posted: 2008-07-31 01:14:54 Post subject: |
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| 落荒而逃 |
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2008-07-31 03:26:25 Post subject: |
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| kino wrote: |
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谢谢, 改了. 我常打错  |
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野航
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 547
Location: toronto
野航Collection |
| Posted: 2008-07-31 16:16:46 Post subject: |
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问好白水。
与去年所读作品大异其趣，要准备一把小刀刮眼睛了。
上网查了，加中协会的活动主要是在室内，我家的小朋友们太跳皮了，只怕添乱，还是不去为好。
谢谢你了。
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection |
| Posted: 2008-07-31 17:20:40 Post subject: |
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你随意吧, 我主要是想让你家老人和孩子们去玩玩,听说这次他们准备的挺充分,许多专业演员. |
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司马策风
举人
Joined: 03 Dec 2006
Posts: 1211
Location: 温哥华
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