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哦 麦溜子(外一首)
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PostPosted: 2008-07-04 19:01:11    Post subject: 哦 麦溜子(外一首) Reply with quote

哦 麦溜子

比我们更像土著
但不和我们同宗
也不和我们沾亲
全村三百多户
没有你一间
你不像麻雀
能寄人篱下
也不像燕子
在我们头上做窝

哦 麦溜子

比我们更兴奋
衔着一个金色的消息
一个让我们等到五月
才刚刚成熟的情节
在目光和目光之间
心与心之间 来回传播

哦 麦溜子

比我们更多地走进麦田
比我们更多地顶着天空
用叫声搬走时令
用翅膀挑着白天和黑夜

哦 麦溜子

在村庄里 进进出出
却没有家
在麦田里 忙忙碌碌
却没有收获
我们吃面 吃饺子
你只吃自己仅有的两个音符

哦 麦溜子


老是岁月做的屋子

老是岁月做的屋子
用你清脆的叫喊
让我入居
起初 我很郁闷
没过几天就习惯了
一切和过去没多大区别
只是身子稍微臃肿
黑发里落进些许轻霜
额角上涌起几道
岁月风吹起的波浪
我的胡子 一点不老
隔一天就得割一次
否则 就会疯长

在老的屋子里 我一住四年
可我还没有老眼昏花
眼睛如老家具越磨越亮
我还没有耳背
有时能听到鱼的歌唱
我还没有老糊涂
心里总长出些奇怪的想象
我的脸还能泛出红晕
如秋天的枫叶
也如西山 喝醉的夕阳

倘若有一天 你从我头顶
看到了中到大雪
我会自豪地宣布
我终于有了岁月积淀的光芒
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PostPosted: 2008-07-05 09:44:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

有激情,尚可大为精简.

问好
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PostPosted: 2008-07-05 15:45:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

倘若有一天 你从我头顶
看到了中到大雪
我会自豪地宣布
我终于有了岁月积淀的光芒
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