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《我始终怀揣阵痛的土地》
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PostPosted: 2008-06-23 08:28:06    Post subject: 《我始终怀揣阵痛的土地》 Reply with quote

《我始终怀揣阵痛的土地》

作者:木易沉香

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后来 背影逐渐瘦弱
金黄就开在繁茂中
亲人 整个季节雨水充沛
眼泪丰腴 仿佛骨骼生长我的血肉
始终高举坚强和正直

颗粒一步步走向真实
我曾经的麦地开始裸露疮痍
而又顾此失彼 灌浆风在震颤里壮实饱满
亲人 嘶哑的呼喊终于推开
竖立在生命面前沉重的栅栏

2.
锈蚀的镰刀在夜空中发芽
抽绿 我开始憎恨罂粟的果实
亲人 它一次次将鲜艳褪去
用恶毒的汁液侵蚀你的光华
然后将爱恨情仇刻进我的肉体

我们的枝叶不再相靠
盐水脱下光鲜的外衣
亲人 就象我们在旅途中迷失
各自困顿 终不能相依着
谈论刻骨与生死

3.
我一直惧怕来自内心的隐痛
还能听见失声的马蹄
亲人 你的荒芜生满树木
油盐和柴米 或者会不时开出花来
正如你沦落在外的儿子 怀揣你阵痛的土地

亲人 我的幸福 我的村庄
我的乳名被搁置 于岁月之外的戈壁
她摇晃着攀折游移的云朵
却离不开自己破旧而伟大的土地
在落日下说出 悲怆的确凿和哑默的证据

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PostPosted: 2008-07-01 18:04:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

提上求批~
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PostPosted: 2008-07-01 19:29:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

我相信每一个人的生活
都和植物的升长或其它的什么一样艰难
这种阵痛便有了道理
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PostPosted: 2008-07-01 20:35:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

质朴的语言中爆发出浓烈的情感 学习
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PostPosted: 2008-07-02 15:30:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

她摇晃着攀折游移的云朵
却离不开自己破旧而伟大的土地
在落日下说出 悲怆的确凿和哑默的证据

感人的抒情~问好木易沉香!
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