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[诗散文习作] 桃 树 燃 春
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PostPosted: 2008-03-30 16:20:14    Post subject: [诗散文习作] 桃 树 燃 春 Reply with quote

桃 树 燃 春

寒风还在欺凌大地时,春就在泥土中动情了。她潜进树根,钻入树汁的脉流,爬上树枝等待时机。太阳终于挣扎出冬雾的冰窖,树中的春就骚动了,就迫不及待的拱破枝皮,嘟起粒粒唇红,原野便喑嗡起泣红的幽情……

当茵茵柳色拂去眼里的俗尘,人们就想起了山野的桃花,诱惑爬得心头痒痒的,便呼朋唤友,携琴带酒,随着游春的的人流涌向那轻红浅绿的山麓……

山坡上,橘林间,树树桃花撑着伞伞红雾。嫩嫩的风怯怯地抚过,摇落清甜的春韵,欲湿游人的衣衫…… 有人依树拍照,把桃花的羞色摄进如诗的年华;有人花下歌舞,任青春的激情淌进山壑的静谧……

我徜徉在桃林和人群中,痴寻春的意蕴。花瓣上?只见她的吻痕。暖风中?唯闻飘逝的幽香。少女眼里?可惜只飘过迷蒙的幻影。一阵忧伤袭上心头,你在哪里?我苦寻的春?

仿佛一种天籁的声音撞痛迷幻的神志,我忽然颖悟:春,该是闯荡在天地和历史中的啼血之魂吧?她是无形的,只有灵性的人才能感受到她的呼吸。灼灼桃花只是春的笑靥,而春的昭示只在寻春人的未来隐现,春之声就是跋涉者开创者的心跳和脚印……

默默立在这精神的荒坡上,我会孤独成一株桃树的。根,伸进时间和空间的土壤,而身心,就一字一朵地,燃烧绚丽的痛苦!



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PostPosted: 2008-03-31 01:42:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

美文!欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-21 01:05:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

提上作为例文。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-23 03:08:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

散文诗和诗散文是一样吗?
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PostPosted: 2008-06-23 14:55:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

与荷梦一样,想求教一下周先生,你的诗散文与我们传统意义上的散文诗有何区别与联系?但有一点我觉得要注意,写诗散文不可刻意追求诗意,否则过了头,就投怀送抱到诗歌的怀中了,成为诗歌的情人.
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PostPosted: 2008-06-23 18:20:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

散文诗本质上是诗。

诗散文是诗人的诗意的好像散文的新文体。现在有的诗刊上发表的“诗人随笔”就是诗散文,只是“诗散文”是我命名的。可以讨论、争论、置疑,只有这样才能完善。

不是刻意追求诗意。
当一个人长期浸润诗中,他的生命都诗意化了,他写的散文自然就诗意化了,他写的小说也就不像传统的小说,人物淡化、情节淡化,有诗的意境,语言也是诗意的表达。
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