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我想要回那片云
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 13:59:08    Post subject: 我想要回那片云 Reply with quote

很傻,
在湛蓝如梦的天空
我只想要回我的那片云

就像
盛夏夜
你呵护胸口冰凉的玉
起风时
你惦记窗下散落的诗
黄昏后
你挥手渐渐模糊的海线

在晴朗的阳光下
我目送深情款款晕开的
那片云

我想要回那片云!

云情不浓,
雨儿不会飘来
雨儿不飘
怎么有借口想你?

有了借口想你
才有借口要求
“我是这样的想你呀
请你,想我!”
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 14:49:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

刚来个笨的,又来个傻的~~ 咋回事啦??
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 14:50:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

一个恋蝶,一个要云
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 16:33:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

真傻!根据调查,你的云在姓孙的那里。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 17:17:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

"我想要回那片云"

聪明的,婴儿般的,一往情深......



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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 17:20:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
一个恋蝶,一个要云


天上人间.......
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 19:57:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

我是真傻,别人可是假笨~~
诗盗,我晒你一首诗吧~~
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 19:59:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
真傻!根据调查,你的云在姓孙的那里。



悟空借去腾去了~~我知道,还给我!!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-18 20:00:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
刚来个笨的,又来个傻的~~ 咋回事啦??


哈哈~~还有没有啦~~都来来~~
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PostPosted: 2008-06-19 09:56:23    Post subject: 晒啥!鼓捣个重点工作吧! Reply with quote

红袖添乱 wrote:
我是真傻,别人可是假笨~~
诗盗,我晒你一首诗吧~~

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