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心痛之上——写给汶川大地震中离去的同胞

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-06-14 14:57:09 Post subject: 心痛之上——写给汶川大地震中离去的同胞

震痛唤醒了我们的良知可我们再也不能把离去的同胞唤醒心痛之上 ——写给汶川大地震中离去的同胞·赵福治泪在泪水中打旋。我不确信手中的笔怎样划动，才能描绘五月十二日震动之下的汶川，残缺的肢体和曾经温暖流动的血液。心痛了裂了，此时地震不再是一个名词而是一个痛词，刺在举国善良人的心里血在血中班驳。可我却看到你们离去时挥舞的手臂。在曾经生活的热土这场灾难是一场残酷的终极，你们求生的挣扎让活着的亲人无语。但走好啊一定走好啊，不要再出现在在一次次悲伤昏厥中醒来亲人的梦里尽管，我知道土中有你们的眼睛亲人们的眼泪淹没在土里离去的同胞们，你们一定很想念你们的亲人想亲人了，就在天国放声地哭吧这个季节，注定是泪是水是土做的遗憾和凄惨的叹息离去的已经离去。同胞们今夜，我用自己献出的鲜血润笔用诗人的良知，为你们写一首悼词让洪水般奔涌在胸的伤痛，祭奠你们的远去

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2008-06-14 15:02:27 Post subject:

血在血中班驳。可我却看到你们离去时挥舞的手臂。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2008-06-14 15:24:39 Post subject:

今夜，我用自己献出的鲜血润笔用诗人的良知，为你们写一首悼词诗人的良知是诗歌之本啊. 问好诗人. 共勉

William Zhou周道模
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Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Posted: 2008-06-14 15:52:04 Post subject:

赵君献血了。此诗情感浓郁，时有冲击力的佳句。“班驳”---斑驳？ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
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Location: 中国温州
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Posted: 2008-06-14 18:00:26 Post subject:

情感真挚，诗句凝练！在一次次悲伤昏厥中醒来亲人的梦里在一次次悲伤昏厥中醒来的亲人梦里这样是不是顺一点 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

kino
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Posted: 2008-06-14 19:13:43 Post subject:

此时地震不再是一个名词而是一个痛词，刺在举国善良人的心里

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-06-14 19:45:49 Post subject:

用诗人的良知，为你们写一首悼词让洪水般奔涌在胸的伤痛，祭奠你们的远去

秀水
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Joined: 31 May 2008
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Location: 山东聊城
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Posted: 2008-06-15 14:48:35 Post subject:

离去的已经离去。同胞们今夜，我用自己献出的鲜血润笔用诗人的良知，为你们写一首悼词让洪水般奔涌在胸的伤痛，祭奠你们的远去 _________________ 同悲.问候赵老师 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

司马策风
举人

Joined: 03 Dec 2006
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Location: 温哥华
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Posted: 2008-06-15 16:02:41 Post subject:

浓情感人. 问好 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

wq0066
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Joined: 01 Jun 2008
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Location: 中国重庆
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Posted: 2008-06-16 07:25:28 Post subject:

情真意切!感同身受! 谢谢美文分享!问好! _________________ 天边云一朵苍海粟一粒云儿朵朵随风飘粟儿粒粒满山崖

陶斯人也
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Posted: 2008-06-17 19:15:46 Post subject:

含泪的诗句

弟弟
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Joined: 06 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2008-06-19 00:15:51 Post subject:

问好 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/qizongdi

荷梦
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Posted: 2008-06-19 03:59:24 Post subject:

震痛唤醒了我们的良知可我们再也不能把离去的同胞唤醒

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