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鹅卵石
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PostPosted: 2008-06-12 19:49:53    Post subject: 鹅卵石 Reply with quote
它们是乘洪水
而来的移民
洪水消失后
成了裸露的群体

鹅卵石成了抢手货
有人用它建房
更多的人运到城里卖钱
还想发现金子和钻石

我有一个
比他们更大的梦
让鹅卵石
全部变成我的语言
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PostPosted: 2008-06-12 21:13:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
圆圆的梦。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-13 07:09:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
诗般的梦，艺术的梦，茉儿支持Razz
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PostPosted: 2008-06-13 07:57:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
这也是鹅卵石的梦
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PostPosted: 2008-06-13 11:20:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
苏茉儿 wrote:
诗般的梦，艺术的梦，茉儿支持Razz



支持要写~~
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PostPosted: 2008-06-13 14:16:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
红袖添乱 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
诗般的梦，艺术的梦，茉儿支持Razz



支持要写~~


嗯，我去奋笔。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-13 14:29:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
苏茉儿 wrote:
红袖添乱 wrote:
苏茉儿 wrote:
诗般的梦，艺术的梦，茉儿支持Razz



支持要写~~


嗯，我去奋笔。



哈哈h~~~~~
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PostPosted: 2008-06-13 21:04:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢大家
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PostPosted: 2008-06-14 07:21:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
很有意境的好诗!拜读了...

问声好!
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PostPosted: 2008-06-14 10:17:58    Post subject: Reply with quote
段与段之间的落差成了曲兄作品的特色。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-14 17:42:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
石何言哉?

Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-06-14 20:46:45    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢诗盗兄看出我的破绽
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PostPosted: 2008-06-17 09:08:28    Post subject: 何说破绽，若能形成强烈的风格也不坏。 Reply with quote
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谢谢诗盗兄看出我的破绽

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