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青春舞曲[3]
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PostPosted: 2008-06-11 19:54:52    Post subject: 青春舞曲[3] Reply with quote

训导 Razz Razz Razz


"通知,请各班同学们注意;校宣队的同学们请赶快到学校舞台集合排
练......"



巳经坐在教室里准备上课的偶和同学们不得巳起身离开课堂......



那时候,这样的紧急通知可是屡见不鲜.学习,究竟学到了什么?大部份时间都是在舞台上度过.记得为偶们执教舞蹈的是成都音乐学院毕业一个子小巧玲珑,模样俊秀的年轻教师.舞姿可是美得没法形容.甭管跳哪个民族的舞蹈,真是摹仿得唯妙唯肖.



听说;某老师就是个矮了点,否则早就进入东方歌舞团深造.偶们一行在她严格训导下,每天坚持压腿,云手,下腰,时间不长,由她编排的这支[草原女民兵]舞蹈在当时那小小县城也还是小有名气,各单位部门搞什么庆典,也总是请校宣队的同学们为此捧场.



偶们可是爱好广泛,专注,刻苦加上训导有方,让偶们对乐曲,对舞蹈的那股子激情一直延续至今.虽然,光阴荏苒,岁月不再,当年的青春时光巳一去不复返.但是对音乐,对舞蹈的情有独钟仍然让偶痴迷永远......
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PostPosted: 2008-06-12 14:27:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

记叙过去的岁月,要感人就要有细节的描绘。
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PostPosted: 2008-06-12 17:53:24    Post subject: 回复 Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
记叙过去的岁月,要感人就要有细节的描绘。


嗯!就是感觉缺少一些细节描述.谢谢老师指教!
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