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入围春天(外一首)
吟啸徐行
举人


Joined: 03 May 2008
Posts: 1336
Location: 中国安徽
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PostPosted: 2008-05-26 18:37:23    Post subject: 入围春天(外一首) Reply with quote

入围春天

我和冬天的主场赛
还没有开始
却早已走漏风声
霜 提前预订了门票
并带着事先染好的各色小旗
前来作拉拉队
随着比赛的深入
或渐进高潮
我知道 白雪公主
也会赶来助兴

我用我的奔跑
带动风的脚步
我用迂回战术
消耗冬天的体力
虚虚实实
声东击西
我的进攻比冰刀
更锋利地插过去
对于严密的冬天
我总能找到一个破绽

如一匹黑马杀出
我凌空抽射
我的思想
是一记精彩的好球
没有谁能阻挡
它带着我提前打进春天
入围下一轮角逐


最大的悲剧

别人说 网是你的天堂
我说 网是你的地狱

别人说 你是网的主人
我说 你是网的俘虏

一生蹲在一张网里
一生为一张网而活
这是我多年前夏天
从老屋檐下路过
听到小虫触网时
抬头看到的
乡村 最大的悲剧
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彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
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Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2008-05-27 04:15:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

从老屋檐下路过
听到小虫触网时
抬头看到的
乡村 最大的悲剧
...生活的诗意.
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东流到海
童生


Joined: 23 May 2008
Posts: 43

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PostPosted: 2008-05-27 04:47:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

和冬天打一场球赛,向春天进军,想法不错.
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