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悲怆行(古风)
王君明
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PostPosted: 2008-05-16 23:22:09    Post subject: 悲怆行(古风) Reply with quote



恨苍天无情死神逼,一霎天塌地坼撼家国!西川破碎震波连,蜀道横绝消息塞。号恸转瞬亲人逝,九州日月顿失色。繁华如梦飞尘散,断垣呼救一何亟!娘亲惊何处?娇儿命丝悬。天府传悲怆,哭声干云天。幸存父老形影孤,学子殒命惨长眠。豪言此刻休作秀,大难当前谁赴先?宰辅旋即出京畿,临危大任担铁肩。军民奋战夜继日,分秒必争恐迟延。废墟重叠搜救急,险象连环举世牵。奈何三军不发因道堵,但为罹难百姓何妨一发雷霆怒!武警壮士急行军,跋山涉水振旗鼓。天兵空降羽檄驰,废墟医疗勤慰抚。遂令天下华夏族,抗震救灾惊风雨。噫吁嘻,悲情一歌,戊子中华泪雨因之纷纷何其多!我恨天公最不公,春雪凝冰冻空濛。可怜江南彻骨冷,普天之下大不同。我叹厚土最无德,陡发淫威后静默,夺我苍生天伦乐,孤儿从此长凄恻。我谓神仙不佑民,坐享香火枉为神,藏区血刃还放火,原是持戒诵经人!我嗟书生无所用,未赴灾区愧薪俸,但将赤胆剖君前,血脉交融生死共。愿君莫逐名和利,名利无非类游戏,亲情和美知足时,天地蜉蝣身如寄。愿君两忘得与失,莫学捣鬼正心术,闲来自在二三子,濠上钓罢鼓琴瑟。愿君敞怀真美善,披襟坦荡时勤勉,冷眼热肠托丹青,东篱如画可消遣。愿君远离争和斗,爱怜黄口恤妪叟,大道轮回情依旧,守望幸福一牵手。神思何苍茫,吟眸盈泪光。君不见瓦砾之下阴阳隔,高楼倾覆多学堂!中宵披襟难成寐,且从陇首举酹觞。长歌当哭肝肠断,楚水巴山衔恨长。我寄愁心与缺月,万里揪心忍回望。爱无疆,慰国殇;十三亿,弥刚强。一呼捐助八方应,爱心接力再谱抗灾锦绣章!

(2008-5-16,单位值夜班,含泪临屏。)


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松云老人
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PostPosted: 2008-05-17 00:02:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

好一首古风!灾情历历在目!感喟唏嘘,慷慨激昂。确有谪仙风骨。激赏!同慨。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-05-17 05:12:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

与松云先生同感同慨。悲情浩浩,感慨万端。
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PostPosted: 2008-05-17 17:19:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

深沉。
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他乡客
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PostPosted: 2008-05-18 17:30:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

君明公好诗-《悲怆行》。上质问苍天,下斥责厚土。可谓惊天地,泣鬼神;抚生灵,正心术。表吾等欲言而不得言之感,欲哭而无泪之痛。先生才高,仁厚,在下深深敬佩。
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PostPosted: 2008-05-18 23:41:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

一一揖谢各位先生!并祝各位安康!
莫学处于地震圈中,余震不断,上网不便,迟复为歉!
深切哀悼逝去的同胞!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-19 02:46:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

王君明 wrote:
一一揖谢各位先生!并祝各位安康!
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君明保重!祝福你及同胞们平安!
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-05-19 06:26:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

沉痛地向震灾中死难同胞致哀。

君明保重!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-22 14:33:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

君明兄保重。也希望君明兄安定下来后,多写些有关地震的作品。虽然官方有不少报道,但是民间的记载更是可贵。例如每当我读蔡文姬的《胡笳十八拍》,都为她史诗般的描写所感动。距今两千年的距离一下子拉近了。
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为天有眼兮何不见我独漂流,
为神有灵兮何事处我天南海北头。
我不负天兮天何配我殊匹,
我不负神兮神何殛我越荒州。
制兹八拍兮拟排忧,
何知曲成兮转悲愁。
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PostPosted: 2008-05-22 22:13:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

揖谢楼上qinghongh、黄洋界、他乡客诸吟长!冰河无恙,感动各位牵念!

各位保重!!
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