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黄昏(外二首)
李资富
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 00:30:08    Post subject: 黄昏(外二首) Reply with quote

黄昏(外二首)

擦了半天
才把夕阳这坨浆糊擦干净
留下一河的水
微微喘息

油菜为一把把豆荚所累
略显成熟的麦穗
冷不丁就掏出几枚蝴蝶
青木树挑逗着每一只路过的鸟儿
车前草偷窥两条蚯蚓
相互抚摩对方的身体

黄昏时刻
夜的黑铺天盖地涌过来
我来不及躲避
我被几行诗句牢牢钉在
垫脚或洗衣的几块石头上

2008年4月30日晚上


两只鱼

下班了,拎几条蚯蚓
到芙蓉溪换两只鱼回来
养在瓷盆里

两只鱼试着跳跃
试着飞翔,都无济于事
他们将内心的恐惧和愤怒
一字一句吐出来
压低了盆压碎了瓷

一只猫扬起猎枪
两只鱼应声而落
伤心的儿子狠狠踹过去
他不在乎猫凄厉的叫声
他不在乎猫快要做母亲

想想整个事件
我问心有愧
我无地自容

2008年5月1日黎明


五一劳动节

整几杯丰谷老窖
烫点点鲢鱼火锅
斗半天小地主
喝一缸北川茶

在没有劳动的五一劳动节
从外到内
我有一种莫名的累

2008年5月1日下午
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 04:54:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

五一劳动节

整几杯丰谷老窖
烫点点鲢鱼火锅
斗半天小地主
喝一缸北川茶

在没有劳动的五一劳动节
从外到内
我有一种莫名的累
....质朴,有味道,喜欢这首.
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 06:52:54    Post subject: 黄昏(外二首) Reply with quote

留下一河的水
微微喘息


在没有劳动的五一劳动节
从外到内
我有一种莫名的累

好有韵味的诗句,即使没有劳动的劳动节,也会给人一种莫名的疲惫,这似乎已不单是身体,相信……
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 07:03:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

五一劳动节

整几杯丰谷老窖
烫点点鲢鱼火锅
斗半天小地主
喝一缸北川茶

在没有劳动的五一劳动节
从外到内
我有一种莫名的累

2008年5月1日下午



五一节劳动

带两个孩子吃早饭,配眼镜
买菜,煮饭,抽空在网上隐身
趴在午休的枕头上,眼镜
被远道而来的电话惊醒
花园里喝龙井,玩干瞪眼
四个大人一直瞪到六点半
两家人一起杀到牛肉馆
晚上,从楼上到楼下,
一个拖把,一条毛巾
我的腰腿用酸疼强烈提示
今天过的是五一劳动节

节好,问好资富~
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 17:10:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好三位诗人!握手!半溪明月的五一节有味道!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 17:54:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄昏(外二首)

擦了半天
才把夕阳这坨浆糊擦干净
留下一河的水
微微喘息

油菜为一把把豆荚所累
略显成熟的麦穗
冷不丁就掏出几枚蝴蝶
青木树挑逗着每一只路过的鸟儿
车前草偷窥两条蚯蚓
相互抚摩对方的身体

黄昏时刻
夜的黑铺天盖地涌过来
我来不及躲避
我被几行诗句牢牢钉在
垫脚或洗衣的几块石头上

2008年4月30日晚上

这首读着来劲~问好资富!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 22:01:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

擦了半天
才把夕阳这坨浆糊擦干净
留下一河的水
微微喘息

油菜为一把把豆荚所累
略显成熟的麦穗
冷不丁就掏出几枚蝴蝶
青木树挑逗着每一只路过的鸟儿
车前草偷窥两条蚯蚓
相互抚摩对方的身体

富有诗思!
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