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旅途花絮
白云
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PostPosted: 2008-05-01 21:34:01    Post subject: 旅途花絮 Reply with quote

旅途花絮

一屁股坐下来,我长长吁了口气,岳岳在怀里也安静下来。我向给我让座的老先生道了声谢,心怀感激又有些不安。

老家的父母乔迁,定于今天五一节在横梁镇宴请亲朋以示庆贺,父亲早就叮嘱我一定要回去。妻的单位加班,我带上女儿岳岳,一大早就去南京中央门赶汽车。节日期间去六合的公交车特难坐,虽有先见之明,我还是错过了两趟车。这公交车是上去才买票,抱着岳岳我是不敢和那么多人比赛挤车的。女儿这两天身体不好,走不了几步就喊累,只好抱着。随后来了辆个体户汽车,咱终于上去了,车里人满满登登的,没座也不管了。刚上车时好象座位上有人注意看了我一会儿,但终于没吭声。车厢里闷热,人声嘈杂,多是乘客与车主在讨价还价。这时候黑车提价是正常的,车主傲得象地保,谁不就范就下去!终于没人下车,车厢内渐趋平静。

我实在抱不动了,就让岳岳站着,扶着旁边一位稍大些男孩的座位扶手。车速很快,颠簸得厉害。忽然车主象发现新大陆似的嚷道:“这三个孩子没买票!谁家的?小孩不要占着座位!”没人答应。这三个十岁出头的孩子分坐在车厢中部,其中一个就在岳岳旁边。喊了四五声后,车后部有一女子不情愿地说:“我买半票就是啦,有什么大不了的!”

我看人太挤,抱起岳岳向后挪了些,旁边象是一对老夫妻。没一会儿,听到老太太说:“老头子,让这抱小孩的坐吧。” 我连忙推辞,那白发老先生还是坚持让我坐下来了。

老太太很慈祥,拿出包中一件衣服给岳岳盖上。岳岳今天起得早,好象累了,躺在我怀里已经睡着了。老太太说他们一家四口刚从北京旅游回来,去时坐的飞机,回来坐火车到南京就转上了这汽车。她与老伴原住乡下的,目前给六合城里的女儿照顾小孙女儿。还指给我看后面座位,说那是她女儿和孙女儿。我转身不便,斜着身子从座椅缝隙里只看到背后的小姑娘,十来岁,长得挺水灵,半坐半躺着正在看窗外的风景。约摸过了一刻钟,我实在不好意思,想请老先生自己坐,可他说啥也不肯。这时我背后传来一女子的声音:“小青,起来让你爷爷坐吧”。小女孩没吱声。

车厢里依旧静悄悄的,只听见呼呼的风声。窗外艳阳高照,青青绿野,一片春意盎然。
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 03:08:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

花絮, 馨香一路!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-02 08:19:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好冰清先生!
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2008-05-05 16:59:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎新文友!

这篇是白云的白描啊,白描生活,作者不露声色。
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2008-05-06 05:34:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

虽然描写不露声色,但愈见老人的可敬了!
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PostPosted: 2008-05-06 08:19:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好周先生与荷梦先生!多谢交流,我是这回老家的一点花絮,其实还想多记一些,现正在往后加长呢,标题改为“回家”了,是个流水帐,待完成后发来请指点。
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