半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-04-05 06:59:08 Post subject: 【老古董】 |
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【老古董】
清明节,我在阆中逛古城
旧银器、雕花床、梳妆匣
越古老越值钱。我家也有古董
两副老骨头,没享孙辈一天福
就躺倒在老家的自留地里
因常惦记我家的古董
梦里也会和他们摆摆龙门阵
祖父埋怨我亲祖母多于他
趁我注意那只闪烁的烟雾报警器
竟将绳子套上了脖子
我大骇。急抱两腿上抬
祖父很轻。一家人都在睡着
怎么能让祖父再死一次
梦里,我一遍遍地抢救
没人帮我,我就急醒自己
凌晨四点,老古董让我丢了宝地痛
写于阆中08年4月4日清明节 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2008-04-05 07:27:06 Post subject: |
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接近于很好了的诗歌 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-04-05 16:37:28 Post subject: |
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呵呵,谢谢岛夸奖~ |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-05 17:59:44 Post subject: |
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昼思夜梦 |
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鹿向亮 童生

Joined: 11 Mar 2008 Posts: 36 Location: 燕赵故里 鹿向亮Collection |
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莞君 秀才
Joined: 20 Oct 2007 Posts: 561 Location: 中国 陕西 莞君Collection |
Posted: 2008-04-06 05:51:03 Post subject: |
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很好的一个 耐品 有回味 握手问好姐姐 _________________ 莞君 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-04-06 06:13:25 Post subject: |
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问好白水~ |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-04-06 06:14:49 Post subject: |
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鹿向亮 wrote: |
梦里梦外总关情,问好朋友! 快乐! |
问好鹿向亮~ |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-04-06 06:27:33 Post subject: |
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谢谢莞君的一贯支持~ |
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钓月 秀才
Joined: 12 Apr 2008 Posts: 409 Location: 中国江苏 钓月Collection |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-04-18 00:54:58 Post subject: |
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谢钓月提旧作~问好! |
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