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【老古董】
半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-04-05 06:59:08    Post subject: 【老古董】 Reply with quote

【老古董】


清明节,我在阆中逛古城
旧银器、雕花床、梳妆匣
越古老越值钱。我家也有古董
两副老骨头,没享孙辈一天福
就躺倒在老家的自留地里

因常惦记我家的古董
梦里也会和他们摆摆龙门阵
祖父埋怨我亲祖母多于他
趁我注意那只闪烁的烟雾报警器
竟将绳子套上了脖子
我大骇。急抱两腿上抬
祖父很轻。一家人都在睡着

怎么能让祖父再死一次
梦里,我一遍遍地抢救
没人帮我,我就急醒自己
凌晨四点,老古董让我丢了宝地痛


写于阆中08年4月4日清明节
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PostPosted: 2008-04-05 07:27:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

接近于很好了的诗歌
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-04-05 16:37:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,谢谢岛夸奖~
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PostPosted: 2008-04-05 17:59:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

昼思夜梦
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PostPosted: 2008-04-06 03:38:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

梦里梦外总关情,问好朋友! 快乐!
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PostPosted: 2008-04-06 05:51:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的一个 耐品 有回味 握手问好姐姐
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PostPosted: 2008-04-06 06:13:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
昼思夜梦


问好白水~
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PostPosted: 2008-04-06 06:14:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

鹿向亮 wrote:
梦里梦外总关情,问好朋友! 快乐!


问好鹿向亮~
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PostPosted: 2008-04-06 06:27:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢莞君的一贯支持~
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PostPosted: 2008-04-16 19:45:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

怎么能让祖父再死一次
梦里,我一遍遍地抢救

梦也是真实!梦里梦外总关情
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PostPosted: 2008-04-18 00:54:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

钓月 wrote:
怎么能让祖父再死一次
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谢钓月提旧作~问好!
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