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PostPosted: 2008-03-08 17:48:07    Post subject: 原创楹联（五） Reply with quote

出句：肆虐奔腾狂浪溅
对句：轻盈迅速极光明
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 07:30:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
“奔腾""溅“属动词（自动词），“绚丽”“明“属形容词，词性不对。
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 15:59:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
好的，我会修改的。谢谢您！
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PostPosted: 2008-04-11 20:57:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-04-11 23:11:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
郑达夫 wrote:
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达夫兄好！
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