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《河姆渡》
刘星源
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Joined: 05 Apr 2008
Posts: 54
Location: 山东
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PostPosted: 2008-04-11 18:35:37    Post subject: 《河姆渡》 Reply with quote

《河姆渡》
-----祭奠我的祖先、我的灵魂


黄土覆盖黄土
历史重叠历史
在几十个世纪面前 我突然
忘记了所有的言语
忘记了自己
文字是那么的苍白无力
记忆是那么的不自量力



我在一场梦里走失
又在一场梦里溯游而上
回到家乡
回归原始
曾经的乡人现在叫先人
曾经的故事现在叫历史
而我的村庄 却
在风中 在雨中
在这片苦难而神圣的土地上
站成了永恒


这句话我该向谁诉说 --------
有一个村庄她埋在土中
你知不知道她的名字
这句话谁会听我诉说--------
有一个村庄她住着我的祖先
你知不知道她的名字
许多人离我和她很近
而我依旧感到遥远 我知道
我其实是独自一人来到这里


我是谁
我来自哪里
我身在何处?
他们说这里是河姆渡
河姆渡?
渡在何处
向何处渡?

山东省济宁市金宇路3号济宁职业技术学院经管系物流2班 刘星元 邮编272000
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-04-11 18:50:50    Post subject: 欢迎新朋友~ Reply with quote

很抒情~诗歌还是要有节点,尽量让句子跳跃起来!问好!
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