游向高原的鱼
秀才
Joined: 20 May 2007
Posts: 382
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 Posted: 2008-04-04 01:52:07 Post subject: 和qinghongh春日偶感（二） |
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夕照青山驻晚霞，炊烟曳曳柳新芽。
门前又过青青草，一路离离一路家。
下面是qinghongh的七绝 春日偶感（二）
春暖雪消出晚霞，门前草绿树抽芽。
远离故土几多载，茅舍天涯是我家。
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-04-04 06:11:25 Post subject: |
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门前又过青青草
一路离离一路家
描写出清新愉悦之情，欣赏。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
莹雪Collection |
| Posted: 2008-04-04 23:40:52 Post subject: |
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| 更喜转句。 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2008-04-05 04:38:30 Post subject: |
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| 谢鱼兄和诗。问好！ |
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王君明
秀才
Joined: 03 Apr 2007
Posts: 250
Location: 甘肃天水
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| Posted: 2008-04-05 19:40:23 Post subject: |
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远离故土几多载，茅舍天涯是我家。
好诗！
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
| Posted: 2008-04-06 22:55:44 Post subject: |
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| 王君明 wrote: |
远离故土几多载，茅舍天涯是我家。
好诗！ |
谢君明欣赏。问好！ |
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