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助人的快乐（外一首）

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Posted: 2008-04-04 16:50:05 Post subject: 助人的快乐（外一首）

助人的快乐（外一首）田斌在武汉去昆明的 K109次奔驰的列车上我仰躺在9车厢 3号位的下铺上一位沿途企求的母亲悄悄地来到我身边用低声的口吻说 “换个铺行吗我在6号位上铺带着孩子起夜不方便” 我虽有些不情愿但看到母子无助的样子我默默地点了点头 “好一个现代活雷锋” 在同伴们的调侃声中我分明感受到助人的快乐《舞蹈的电缆》在奔驰的电气化列车上我仰躺在卧铺上窗外电缆线在舞蹈一会儿升腾一会儿跌落随奔驰的列车静止的电缆线在我的目光里舞蹈舞蹈的电缆活像一个小精灵灵动我沉寂而无尽的思绪邮编：242000 通联：皖宣城市开元小区宣州区文化馆电话：（0563）2025012 E-mail: xctianbin@163.com

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Posted: 2008-04-04 19:14:43 Post subject:

很好的尝试，题材上跳出了“她”。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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