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夜色情怀

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Posted: 2008-03-22 21:16:49 Post subject: 夜色情怀

夜色，缓缓流动如潮是我血液里萌动的情诗辉煌的桥拼命地抓住两座迷离欲坠的小岛我惊慌的发现匆忙间，竟忘了带昨夜你意味深长的微笑日渐依赖你的笑容，夜夜将蚀骨的风挡在门外让我像婴儿一样酣然入梦老城的有轨缆车摇着最古旧的铜铃引我穿过谜样的夜色明日是雾里花开还是风中叶落？不管它！只要有你在未知的那端等我真想，倦鸟一样缩卷在你怀里听着你郁金香般的碎语望着你伤痕般的目光昏昏睡去。。。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-03-22 23:01:55 Post subject:

夜，从心里向外扩散圈起四周景物最深层的欲望摇摆随这条长河涌动 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-23 08:30:24 Post subject:

梦想飞度闪亮的光为今夜造了一座桥我走过桥去为了看你迷人的微笑 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-03-24 00:35:14 Post subject:

辉煌的桥拼命的抓住两左迷离欲坠的小岛

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Posted: 2008-03-24 00:36:36 Post subject:

辉煌的桥拼命的抓住两左迷离欲坠的小岛

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Posted: 2008-03-24 08:52:59 Post subject:

这又是哪座桥 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-03-24 21:48:53 Post subject:

我的理解是桥是爱情两座坠落的小岛是一对情人

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Posted: 2008-03-25 05:38:36 Post subject:

雾里花开, 风中叶落, 不管!

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Posted: 2008-03-26 03:51:03 Post subject: 夜色情怀

夜色，层层凝固如脂是我角膜上流动的水印楚楚的桥小心地系住两段迷离欲坠的光阴你有没有感觉道别时，我还年轻如夜如昨夜灯火辉煌的暧昧白昼会替长夜关灯，朝朝将销魂的梦晒在竿上让我像机器一样井然有序老城的赤铜缆车沿着一种纷杂的轨迹穿过我苍白沉默的风情命理是晃如昼日还是暗如杳星？都不是！只是写在我那只与你恒温的掌心真想，从桥上婷婷袅袅地渡回从前有着你魔咒般的深情想着你流水般的青春汩汩成音。。。 _________________ 人称呆嫂

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Posted: 2008-03-26 04:56:19 Post subject:

呆嫂怎不另起新贴？ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-26 07:53:33 Post subject:

真花想，从桥上婷婷袅袅地渡回从前有着你魔咒般的深情全想着你流水h般的青春汩汩成音北美枫。。。呆嫂呀呀呀~~~~我我我呆~~ 除了一句我感觉有点不好穿过我苍白沉默的风情让我像机器一样井然有序有些太冷硬~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-03-26 15:18:50 Post subject: 回班长的话

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

呆嫂怎不另起新贴？

呆哥说,中年妇女最好不要抛头露面. Embarassed

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Posted: 2008-03-26 15:28:37 Post subject: 是有几句比较生冷.

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真花想，从桥上婷婷袅袅地渡回从前
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我想像这首诗是一碗上好的莲子羹,这些比较生冷苦涩的就该是莲子的芯,香糯之余还有清胆明目的食效.

谢谢红袖美仑美奂的诗情.
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Posted: 2008-03-26 18:32:40 Post subject:

呆哥的女人 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

真花想，从桥上婷婷袅袅地渡回从前
...

我想像这首诗是一碗上好的莲子羹,这些比较生冷苦涩的就该是莲子的芯,香糯之余还有清胆明目的食效.
...

可我太喜欢你的。。我能那个什么吗？
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而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-03-26 19:21:48 Post subject:

我还年青如夜年青的夜新鲜

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Posted: 2008-03-26 21:28:49 Post subject: 您哪！

呆哥的女人 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

呆嫂怎不另起新贴？

呆哥说,中年妇女最好不要抛头露面. Embarassed

别事事听呆哥的，也许在这件事上头，他还真是呆了一回。
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Posted: 2008-03-29 06:23:06 Post subject: 见过新班长.

红袖添乱 wrote:

呆哥的女人 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

真花想，从桥上婷婷袅袅地渡回从前
...

我想像这首诗是一碗上好的莲子羹,这些比较生冷苦涩的就该是莲子的芯,香糯之余还有清胆明目的食效.
...

可我太喜欢你的。。我能那个什么吗？

能,当然能. 互相学习吧.
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Posted: 2008-03-29 06:31:05 Post subject:

曲元奇 wrote:

我还年青如夜年青的夜新鲜

写这句的时候我想的是一个英语词组,"as young as the night",是一种朦胧暧昧的表达."The night is young",比较常见;是一句鼓盅年青人通宵达旦狂欢的开场白,我也常理解成两个有故事的人彼此暗示情愫难了,要慢慢来.
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