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《蚕逼桑叶唱出死亡三步曲》(外几首)
纳兰容若
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 23:23:14    Post subject: 《蚕逼桑叶唱出死亡三步曲》(外几首) Reply with quote

《蚕逼桑叶唱出死亡三步曲》
蚕食一片桑叶的
绿色。就等于蚕食整个春天

嘴唇含着桑叶的
蚕 催逼桑叶唱出死亡三步曲

硬化 腹水和致命的癌
让一片桑叶经历了岩石 海洋和
蝙蝠般的一生

蚕吃掉的部分就是隐而未现的
部分。裸露出的死亡 骨头和梗
让桑叶一生的脉络
清晰而透明

《一棵小树随时都可以像森林一样》
这样活着多好
每天听听音乐,晒晒阳光,
写写心仪的诗歌

每天像小鸟一样早睡
早起。用目光抚摩被露珠打湿的花蕊,
用心灵感恩

如果花蕊愿意
一棵小树随时都可以像森林一样
那么骄傲那么粗壮那么挺拔

《流水的声音不需要倾听》
鹅卵石里的耳朵
滴答滴答的流水声
留给分辨山羊和绵羊的牧者

喇叭花里的喇叭
喇叭花里的花
喧闹和宁静彼此消解
又彼此融合

耳朵长在耳朵上
冰面下的流水
除了月光 可以光明正大地
贴在脸上
适宜亲吻也适宜倾听
《一个人的丝绸之路》
芝麻开门
蚂蚁搬家
在蘑菇下躲雨
看蘑菇
云般升起

像青苔一样
给大地穿衣
苔痕
映碧

针眼看世界
以针尖
走出
一个人的
丝绸之路

拆开闹钟
拉开百叶窗或
隔叶
黄鹂好空音
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莞君
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PostPosted: 2008-03-09 23:49:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏了 很好的几个 问好
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-03-14 19:12:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

让桑叶一生的脉络
清晰而透明 .....有些表达不错,力度上可强化.
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PostPosted: 2008-03-14 20:00:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

蚕吃掉的部分就是隐而未现的
部分。裸露出的死亡 骨头和梗
让桑叶一生的脉络
清晰而透明

很喜欢这一首折射的哲理性光芒~
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