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初春效应

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悠子
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Posted: 2008-03-05 13:14:16 Post subject: 初春效应

雨幕下的春天弥漫的香气往返不定紫罗兰和郁金香招摇的色彩没有来由的，给我欢快粉色的花蕊掠过我的苍白弹奏着蝴蝶的歌曲无法放弃的感动让我开始忘记那些不再温暖的细节一些似乎不可触及的远随着染香的清风不知觉的想要侵入梦里身临春天的现场无言的清脆，穿越迷茫 03/05/2008

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Posted: 2008-03-05 17:10:38 Post subject:

我们的悠子又回来啦。诗意的悠子。。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-05 17:14:51 Post subject:

手痒！雨幕下的春天穿越迷茫，紫罗兰和郁金香招摇的香气往返不定，粉色的花蕊掠过我的苍白，让我开始忘记，那些不再温暖的细节。一些似乎不可触及的远，随着染香的清风，不知觉的想要侵入梦里。身临春天的现场，无法放弃的感动，弹奏着蝴蝶的歌曲，无言的清脆没有来由的，给我欢快！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-05 17:17:33 Post subject: Re: 我们的悠子又回来啦。诗意的悠子。。。。

苏茉儿 wrote:

我们的悠子又回来啦。诗意的悠子。。。。

我是手痒。还得忙一阵子。

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Posted: 2008-03-05 17:20:06 Post subject: Re: 手痒！ ...

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

手痒！
...

我看你才真手痒。呵呵，很好，更欢快了。看看还能不能再重组

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Posted: 2008-03-05 17:24:43 Post subject: 这是最好的了！截至目前，没有更好的。

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

手痒！
...

我看你才真手痒。呵呵，很好，更欢快了。看看还能不能再重组

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Posted: 2008-03-05 17:26:48 Post subject: 要真有！是花吧！想变更花的种类～

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

手痒！
...

我看你才真手痒。呵呵，很好，更欢快了。看看还能不能再重组

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Posted: 2008-03-05 17:29:37 Post subject:

我也手痒，可是写不出。哈哈，，，诗盗那个排版是故意的，还是失手啊，看着乱。倒是组装的不错。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-03-05 17:31:38 Post subject:

我看他是在刺激我哪

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Posted: 2008-03-05 17:36:49 Post subject: Re: 我看他是在刺激我哪

悠子 wrote:

我看他是在刺激我哪

嗯，悠子，你想啊，没有你得妙手，他都组装不出来的。
让他刺激了就上当了。
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Posted: 2008-03-05 17:41:13 Post subject:

我还真要上当。你们看看这样是否好些：春天的雨幕弥漫的香气往返不定紫罗兰和郁金香招摇的色彩没有来由的，给我欢快粉色的花蕊掠过我的苍白弹奏着蝴蝶的歌曲无言的清脆，穿越迷茫一些似乎不可触及的远随着染香的清风不知觉的想要侵入梦里身临春天的现场无法放弃的感动让我开始忘记那些不再温暖的细节 (结尾弱了)

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Posted: 2008-03-05 17:55:23 Post subject: 啊哈～扩大刺激效应！

手痒一加一！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-03-05 18:31:52 Post subject: 觉得没有弱的问题，节奏不够斯幕斯！

悠子 wrote:

我还真要上当。你们看看这样是否好些：
...

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Posted: 2008-03-05 19:04:21 Post subject: Re: 觉得没有弱的问题，节奏不够斯幕斯！

痒起来就很难smooth

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Posted: 2008-03-05 19:06:58 Post subject: Re: 觉得没有弱的问题，节奏不够斯幕斯！

悠子 wrote:

痒起来就很难smooth

我帮你抓抓~~
对我来说~`怎么看都诗意盎然

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Posted: 2008-03-05 19:12:31 Post subject:

本来是还行，被某某搅乱了~~

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Posted: 2008-03-05 19:17:30 Post subject:

这回可怪不得我。

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Posted: 2008-03-05 19:19:54 Post subject: Re: 本来是还行，被某某搅乱了~~

悠子 wrote:

本来是还行，被某某搅乱了~~

嘿嘿~~~ 那某某听到了么, 请我们吃蛋羔吧~

那某某到是很会拆拆装装的~~

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Posted: 2008-03-05 19:32:39 Post subject:

别指望了，听说那某某一羔不发的

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Posted: 2008-03-05 19:45:13 Post subject: 对呀！说到那某某，就是让人某某！总是某某某，还不就是个某某。

悠子 wrote:

别指望了，听说那某某一羔不发的

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