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这个春天,还是有些冷
顾小花
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 01:51:39    Post subject: 这个春天,还是有些冷 Reply with quote

沉 默

不是金。我不止一次的这么想
沿着风走,顺着雨落
一块骨头锁住另外一根骨头
拒绝和任何一棵树木交谈
河水还是悄悄偷走了,我体内
积攒了整个冬天的阳光
春天来的时候
也没告诉我

引 领

一直无法确定
是我去还是你来
一个行程被反复计划
我早已经数不清
这个春天开放过的花朵
也许蜜蜂和蝴蝶知道
他们的幸福
和风一样,来来往往
和坠落一点关系也没有

坠 落

今日凭吊。一簇融化的雪
去年,他曾停留在你的额头
说着一些发白的故事
身子骨越来越小,越来越轻
谁也没能看见最后的飞翔
无论是你还是我,都知道
没有人能阻止春光的抵达
温暖的地上,那些影子
又要丰满起来

重 逢

我要省略一切可以描述的细节
包括过去的遥远,和未来的距离
还有一曲老掉牙的音乐
和你现在一样,把身子降到最低
做一棵刚出芽的小草
对着风点头,向着阳光微笑
和我多年前的预想
一模一样
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陈亚伟
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 07:18:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢1、3首
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 10:28:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

沉默、引领、坠落、重逢、这算是副标题?
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 14:19:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

最后一段很好看!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 15:16:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

虽然看上去不尽是诗的语言,但读着还是有诗味
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 15:40:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗意越来越深邃,转变喜人,先提,后品.
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顾小花
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 17:14:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢各位朋友支持。问候!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-04 17:24:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗意很浓!欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 00:18:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢[引领]一首
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PostPosted: 2008-03-05 03:04:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

所描述的现象基本吻合我的特征!!哈哈哈学习小花
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