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对联学作二十七

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Posted: 2008-02-29 15:41:29 Post subject: 对联学作二十七

对联学作二十七出句:情结解时心结结[烛之幽] 对句:愁绵连处意绵绵[梧桐] 出句:扬威怒扫漫天雪[巫逖] 对句:参静轻披遍地霜[梧桐] 出句：花落篱墙疑有梦[烛之幽] 对句：月凝苇荡确无尘【梧桐】对句：孤胆胸襟天嵌月【梧桐】出句：双眉眼底月摇天【巫逖】对句:初聆北宛西洋调[梧桐] 出句:又见南山阿里松[巫逖] 对句：泉清滟无多水，非白非青非艳【梧桐灌水】汗！勉强！出句：山谷曾有一人，是仙是俗是僧 [随缘转贴] _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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Posted: 2008-02-29 17:40:35 Post subject:

第一联堪称巧对,回环反复,意趣多多. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-02-29 17:59:50 Post subject: Re: 对联学作二十七

花落篱墙疑有梦；月凝苇荡确无尘。孤胆胸襟天嵌月；双眉眼底月摇天。欣赏这两联。由篱笆墙想到芦苇荡，由双眉想到孤胆，想象丰富。如果把对联的难度分为五级的话，那么第一联应为三级：情结解时心结结（当情结解开时，心结也就了结了）。最末一联为四~五级：山谷曾有一人，是仙是俗是僧。这是一个拆字联。（山谷曾加上一个人，则分别是仙俗僧三个字。）对出“泉清滟无多水，非白非青非艳”已经不易。佩服达夫兄锲而不舍的精神~

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Posted: 2008-03-01 23:02:29 Post subject:

谢谢先生鼓励！ _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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Posted: 2008-03-02 14:25:40 Post subject:

喜欢一、三联。

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Posted: 2008-03-02 20:31:13 Post subject:

谢谢先生！问候！ _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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Posted: 2008-03-03 00:30:36 Post subject:

欣赏，问好！

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Posted: 2008-03-03 02:11:51 Post subject: Re: 欣赏，问好！

莹雪 wrote:

欣赏，问好！

谢谢莹雪斑斑！祝福！
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Posted: 2008-03-06 03:05:50 Post subject:

初聆北宛西洋调又见南山阿里松觉得此联十分逗趣，问好楼主。 _________________ 千人之诺诺不如一士之谔谔

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