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[原创新诗] 在牟尼沟独坐水亭

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-02-21 22:36:35 Post subject: [原创新诗] 在牟尼沟独坐水亭

在牟尼沟独坐水亭前面的水冲走了前面的人影后面的水还在雪山等阳光的亲吻我面对的是满沟的树和现在的水声我独坐的是牟尼沟水树环绕的木亭松树在山上心情潮湿松萝垂胡须苍柳在水中感觉凉爽树干挂红根水从雪山滑下来水从草地游过来水从山崖瀑下来水从山坡漫过来水从童年的哭声来水从爱情的泪珠来水从我的手掌去水跟我的思绪去树叶私语听不见鸟儿唱歌听不见草丛开花听不见青蛙结婚听不见听见的是水的漫散是水与树丛的联欢听见的是水的吟诵是水和时间的爱恋多少年牟尼沟才演变成天与地的庙宇是谁把牟尼沟的雪水唱成漂流的经幡 2007．7．22 松潘牟尼沟 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-02-22 02:51:08 Post subject:

水从雪山滑下来水从草地游过来水从山崖瀑下来水从山坡漫过来水从童年的哭声来水从爱情的泪珠来水从我的手掌去水跟我的思绪去文笔行云流水，情思泉涌～问好周，好景致，以后有时间走走！

迪拜
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Posted: 2008-02-22 22:29:02 Post subject:

新感觉问好！

nobody
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Posted: 2008-02-23 01:40:21 Post subject:

这个很不错。手法有点古典。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-02-23 23:10:46 Post subject:

感谢明月、迪拜和 nobody诸君的鼓励！我在散文栏目服务和在西方文学栏目学习，此栏目回帖少了，表歉意啦。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

白水
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Posted: 2008-02-24 08:49:55 Post subject:

不错的诗歌, 问好道模. 照料其他栏目不易, 可以理解

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-02-24 16:46:52 Post subject:

问好白水君！英语我要继续学习，请帮助。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2008-02-25 18:43:05 Post subject:

我来欣赏你的水～～非常独特和美妙～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-02-27 18:24:00 Post subject:

感谢阿依琼裙诗意的分享和春光般的美言！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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