半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-02-21 07:19:31 Post subject: 【悬】 |
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【悬】
悬,是那落入半空中的一块石头
被两座大山挟持
悬而未解,摇摇欲坠
平衡,须用全身的力气
像那只绵羊,永远低着头
站得高,并没看得远
它关注的只是脚下。这块顽石
你得庆幸,它没看见
那些暗藏的断崖和孤独
绝壁上潮湿的青苔和裂缝
如果站得低些,就能看清
悬,就是你沾沾自喜的位置
把石头磨得平滑些
让锋利的棱角朝下
让石头落地,心落入睡眠
让羊在山坡上,幸福地吃草 |
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阿依琼裙 秀才

Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 920 Location: 废墟之上 阿依琼裙Collection |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
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Posted: 2008-02-21 18:40:47 Post subject: |
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不错的作品
问好明月。 |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-21 18:54:41 Post subject: |
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配图的哲理诗,很贴切! |
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nobody 进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006 Posts: 2651 Location: Madtown nobodyCollection |
Posted: 2008-02-21 22:23:03 Post subject: |
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非常关心那只羊。现在何处?草够吃吗?心情呢?另外,为什么呢? _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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杨海军 进士出身
Joined: 01 Mar 2007 Posts: 2205 Location: 吉林 杨海军Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-22 00:13:40 Post subject: |
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把石头磨得平滑些
让锋利的棱角朝下
让石头落地,心落入睡眠
让羊在山坡上,幸福地吃草
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好@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-02-22 02:43:48 Post subject: |
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阿依琼裙 wrote: |
让石头落地,心落入睡眠
让羊在山坡上,幸福地吃草 |
问好阿琼~祝好! |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-02-22 02:44:45 Post subject: |
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迪拜好~ |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-02-22 02:46:44 Post subject: |
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nobody wrote: |
非常关心那只羊。现在何处?草够吃吗?心情呢?另外,为什么呢? |
那只羊有可能是图片合成的,所以不用担心那只羊。既然是假的,后面的问题都不是问题了。不过还是替那只羊感谢NY~  |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-02-22 02:48:07 Post subject: |
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海军好,多提点意见~
祝好! |
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上城 进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007 Posts: 2024 Location: 江夏黄鹤楼 上城Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-22 21:43:28 Post subject: |
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乍看图片,心确实悬了一下。问好 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-22 22:05:54 Post subject: |
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那不是羊!不过俺承认,石头是俺搁上的。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-22 22:08:55 Post subject: |
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月亮, 喜欢这首诗歌. 哲理, 新意. |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-02-23 08:37:49 Post subject: |
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伤城 wrote: |
乍看图片,心确实悬了一下。问好 |
看完诗歌,就不悬了吧?  |
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博弈 榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006 Posts: 4381 Location: SFO 博弈Collection |
Posted: 2008-02-23 20:27:01 Post subject: |
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这是哪儿,造化惊心。。。 _________________ (在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美) |
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遛达的七七 秀才

Joined: 07 Jun 2006 Posts: 329
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Posted: 2008-02-23 20:49:29 Post subject: |
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……还能是哪儿,中段儿的说,呵呵 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-02-24 02:03:25 Post subject: |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
那不是羊!不过俺承认,石头是俺搁上的。 |
如果不是羊,还能是什么?诗盗给想一个?  |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-02-24 02:05:43 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
月亮, 喜欢这首诗歌. 哲理, 新意. |
问好白水兄弟~  |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-02-24 02:07:23 Post subject: |
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博弈:我也不清楚是哪儿,应该是合成照片吧? |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2008-02-24 02:10:21 Post subject: |
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七小姐 wrote: |
……还能是哪儿,中段儿的说,呵呵 |
七见多识广,知道是哪吗? |
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