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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-02-21 07:19:31    Post subject: 【悬】 Reply with quote



【悬】


悬,是那落入半空中的一块石头
被两座大山挟持
悬而未解,摇摇欲坠
平衡,须用全身的力气

像那只绵羊,永远低着头
站得高,并没看得远
它关注的只是脚下。这块顽石
你得庆幸,它没看见
那些暗藏的断崖和孤独
绝壁上潮湿的青苔和裂缝

如果站得低些,就能看清
悬,就是你沾沾自喜的位置

把石头磨得平滑些
让锋利的棱角朝下
让石头落地,心落入睡眠
让羊在山坡上,幸福地吃草
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PostPosted: 2008-02-21 18:05:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

让石头落地,心落入睡眠
让羊在山坡上,幸福地吃草
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PostPosted: 2008-02-21 18:40:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的作品

问好明月。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-21 18:54:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

配图的哲理诗,很贴切!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-21 22:23:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

非常关心那只羊。现在何处?草够吃吗?心情呢?另外,为什么呢?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 00:13:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

把石头磨得平滑些
让锋利的棱角朝下
让石头落地,心落入睡眠
让羊在山坡上,幸福地吃草
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 02:43:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿依琼裙 wrote:
让石头落地,心落入睡眠
让羊在山坡上,幸福地吃草

问好阿琼~祝好!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 02:44:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

迪拜 wrote:
不错的作品

问好明月。


迪拜好~
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 02:46:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
非常关心那只羊。现在何处?草够吃吗?心情呢?另外,为什么呢?


那只羊有可能是图片合成的,所以不用担心那只羊。既然是假的,后面的问题都不是问题了。不过还是替那只羊感谢NY~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 02:48:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
把石头磨得平滑些
...


海军好,多提点意见~ Smile
祝好!
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 21:43:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

乍看图片,心确实悬了一下。问好
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 22:05:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

那不是羊!不过俺承认,石头是俺搁上的。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-22 22:08:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

月亮, 喜欢这首诗歌. 哲理, 新意.
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 08:37:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

伤城 wrote:
乍看图片,心确实悬了一下。问好


看完诗歌,就不悬了吧? Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 20:27:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

这是哪儿,造化惊心。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-23 20:49:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
这是哪儿,造化惊心。。。


……还能是哪儿,中段儿的说,呵呵
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 02:03:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
那不是羊!不过俺承认,石头是俺搁上的。


如果不是羊,还能是什么?诗盗给想一个? Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 02:05:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
月亮, 喜欢这首诗歌. 哲理, 新意.


问好白水兄弟~ Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 02:07:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈:我也不清楚是哪儿,应该是合成照片吧?
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PostPosted: 2008-02-24 02:10:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

七小姐 wrote:
博弈 wrote:
这是哪儿,造化惊心。。。


……还能是哪儿,中段儿的说,呵呵


七见多识广,知道是哪吗?
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