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寒山寺的留言

啥么
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Posted: 2008-02-19 11:23:24 Post subject: 寒山寺的留言

寒山寺里乱糟糟的留言写在哪里都不会有人看见命运和我开了一个玩笑雨大如泼水节寺里的观音都来戏水湿透了罗衫耐不得五更寒我把香炉一个个地搬到雨里香烟缭绕着水中的顷刻 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-02-19 11:33:04 Post subject:

寺里的观音都来戏水湿透了罗衫 ----好看，就是会有点麻烦~ 把香炉一个个地搬到雨里 --要拆庙啦?

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Posted: 2008-02-19 11:35:52 Post subject:

观音想玩水底时候，就自己下点雨，淋湿一院子的人，当然麻烦，还要庙里的和尚尼姑给洗衣服 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-02-19 11:39:52 Post subject:

啥么 wrote:

观音想玩水底时候，就自己下点雨，淋湿一院子的人，当然麻烦，还要庙里的和尚尼姑给洗衣服

那你也别写什么留言了，不如给观音洗衣服吧

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Posted: 2008-02-19 11:46:53 Post subject:

不小心留言都写在观音衣服上了，麻烦吧 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-02-19 11:56:35 Post subject:

那你给观音多买些衣服吧

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Posted: 2008-02-19 19:52:04 Post subject:

帮我留个言，邀请观音等众神来落尘开个会好了。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

拈花微笑
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Posted: 2008-02-19 20:02:37 Post subject:

颇有寒山之风。好文字啊。禅在语言上，也是解构的。 _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-02-22 23:11:29 Post subject:

有趣，也有二层旨意。寺里的观音都来戏水我把香炉一个个地搬到雨里 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2008-02-23 09:42:23 Post subject:

究竟是啥么人写出这么滴文字涅｀｀｀打死偶也想8出 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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