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《雨后的空气》

Zhaozijun
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Posted: 2008-02-22 15:26:56 Post subject: 《雨后的空气》

《雨后的空气》雨后的空气像是被过滤那样地透明清晰远处的山在阳光下闪烁着迷人的绿淡灰色的云在浅蓝色的天海里探秘树被洗了不情愿的冷水澡在路旁无可奈何地打着喷气吐出了新鲜空气让我们呼吸我走在这新鲜的空气里望望天看看地神思就变成了花絮这花絮随着风就在脑的原野里飘去——

苏茉儿
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Posted: 2008-02-22 19:07:05 Post subject:

最后一句很不顺滴说。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-02-22 20:14:53 Post subject:

一场雨的彻底洗涤。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

爱爱
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Posted: 2008-02-22 20:41:45 Post subject:

深深的吸一口,雨后的空气~~清新~~

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