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（独领风骚-图像）一枝红玫瑰

悠子
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Posted: 2008-02-19 07:38:16 Post subject: （独领风骚-图像）一枝红玫瑰

静寂，在灯红酒绿的繁华里浮起孤独潮涌般无声的响过眼睛古树里封密的思念，随你渐远的足迹从此虚构一万个春天清晨里的相遇不在意一千种颜色渲染的华丽远远的咤紫嫣红远远的落英如梦如雨寻寻觅觅，走到山穷水尽只想做你云里月里的一缕风情你用阳光为我编织的那一枝红玫瑰芳香一直飘溢 02/19/2008 作业

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Posted: 2008-02-19 08:51:31 Post subject:

飘了一地悠子的诗情画意！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-02-19 09:46:26 Post subject:

远远的珞锳远远的咤紫嫣红如梦如雨查过这个字，悠子是误用还是刻意用的？远远的珞锳、远远的咤紫嫣红如梦如雨觉得这里应该要有标点。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-02-19 09:57:12 Post subject:

这两个字好看，不好用，看来。我不喜欢加点啦。换了下顺序~

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Posted: 2008-02-19 10:08:33 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

这两个字好看，不好用，看来。
我不喜欢加点啦。换了下顺序~

如果是（落英缤纷）那就是错字。除非简繁不同或其他。否则只找到（璎珞）一起的，是个名词：以珠玉缀成的颈饰。

不喜欢标点应该有不喜欢标点的作法，除非你能自圆其说。
_________________
可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-02-19 11:25:02 Post subject:

将错就错 _________________ 这有点麻烦

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Posted: 2008-02-20 07:08:20 Post subject:

啥么 wrote:

将错就错

你捣乱。开始让偶怀疑，阳光编织的东西，真的8知道是啥。 Evil or Very Mad

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Posted: 2008-02-20 07:44:20 Post subject:

嘿嘿, 我怎么老以为酒红色的玫瑰是暗夜编织的呢~~~~~~~

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Posted: 2008-02-20 07:56:58 Post subject:

爱爱 wrote:

嘿嘿, 我怎么老以为酒红色的玫瑰是暗夜编织的呢~~~~~~~

暧昧呀，爱爱~

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