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三代人

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2008-02-17 02:47:17 Post subject: 三代人

三代人诗/杯中冲浪母亲至少是地主家的小姐父亲当然是地主家的少爷而我，是地主子弟相比我的母亲，相比我的父亲，我的童年遍体鳞伤做儿子时，我因可怜自己而爱父母，怕他们死去做父亲时，我因可怜自己而爱儿子，怕他受苦 2008-2-17 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

半溪明月Collection

Posted: 2008-02-17 07:08:34 Post subject:

三代人就数你不幸～

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2008-02-17 08:04:25 Post subject:

看似写点, 实则写面, 深入浅出, 平实哲理.

戴玨
秀才

Joined: 03 Jan 2007
Posts: 808

戴玨Collection

Posted: 2008-02-17 09:07:21 Post subject:

我因可怜自己而。。。 - 有些話雖沒說出來，但讀者可以感覺到作者的隱痛。 _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

杨海军
进士出身

Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
杨海军Collection

Posted: 2008-02-17 15:26:18 Post subject:

喜欢这样的表述!! _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2008-02-17 18:11:30 Post subject:

问好朋友们，人生有时是很痛苦的，尤其你所处的坏境和时代，你总感觉你的亲人都可怜，你拼命的爱他们，但当你一比较时，你发现你最悲惨。这种悲哀，是个人的，也是时代的，更是大多数人的感觉。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

遛达的七七
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Joined: 07 Jun 2006
Posts: 329

遛达的七七Collection

Posted: 2008-02-17 22:16:20 Post subject:

有纵横，也有无奈此诗很读得过的啦！问好兄

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