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短诗六首，请各位诗友评。问诗友好！

纪才
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Posted: 2008-01-15 00:30:22 Post subject: 短诗六首，请各位诗友评。问诗友好！

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-15 01:37:51 Post subject:

欢迎朋友，诗歌不错~

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-15 05:24:24 Post subject:

很有生活气息, 生动,自如

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-01-15 05:49:46 Post subject:

欢迎新朋友。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-15 16:39:00 Post subject:

（掀开了2007年12月20日）这个方式经典，字里行间尚存凝缩的空间。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

迪拜
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Posted: 2008-01-15 18:20:54 Post subject:

不错

纪才
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Posted: 2008-01-24 05:05:00 Post subject:

问好半溪明月、白水、杯中冲浪、詩盜喜裸評、迪拜等各位诗友好！也问nobody 好！

纪才
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Posted: 2008-01-27 04:45:42 Post subject:

感谢各位诗友的支持与鼓励。

纪才
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Posted: 2008-01-30 05:08:09 Post subject:

问各位诗友小年好！

金金
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Posted: 2008-02-02 01:54:33 Post subject:

太白了。把你的题目拿开基本看不出来你写的是个啥。问好 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

纪才
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Posted: 2008-02-02 16:42:34 Post subject:

问好金金！

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