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今夜，三朵菊花开了一半

倾听书卷
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Posted: 2007-01-04 16:37:05 Post subject: 今夜，三朵菊花开了一半

今夜，三朵菊花开了一半昕，今夜我在虞山，在一个小院子里看合什的指掌间，三朵菊花开了一半三朵白色的花瓣。昕，今夜的美丽也因此缺失一半；你不在，菊花不肯全开三年前你栽下的诺言，我只能看见一半昕，怀想你的面孔，我的心沉过月光月光也仅有一半。这三朵温顺的小猫和瓷三朵烟云；今夜，痛心和沉默地开在我的身旁三朵菊花之前开过的是你，昕，你不知道你开过以后，我一直无法掌握黎明的方向三朵白色的菊花，今夜在虞山在一个小院子里，安静地开了一半而我永远不知道，爱美的昕晶莹的昕，究竟是谁失手将你打碎？

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Posted: 2007-01-04 18:23:19 Post subject:

这三朵温顺的小猫和瓷很凄美的笔调 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-01-04 18:49:53 Post subject:

欢迎一下： http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?p=6335#6335 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-01-04 22:22:05 Post subject:

别致的抒情。欢迎新朋友光临握手问好 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-01-05 16:53:18 Post subject:

凄美, 清新

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Posted: 2007-01-06 06:43:54 Post subject:

都认为好，我直接加精了。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2007-01-07 23:14:05 Post subject:

祝福朋友们. 这里进来,速度真的是非常非常非常地慢啊. _________________ 联系地址: 215500 江苏省常熟市地方志办公室浦君芝

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Posted: 2007-03-21 20:31:22 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

别致的抒情。

欢迎新朋友光临

握手问好

问好，握手了
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Posted: 2007-03-21 20:31:50 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

这三朵温顺的小猫和瓷

很凄美的笔调

感谢岛兄批评
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Posted: 2007-03-21 20:32:18 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

凄美, 清新

握手，希望多交流批评
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Posted: 2007-03-21 20:33:04 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

都认为好，我直接加精了。

问候杯中冲浪，谢。为了诗歌，握手
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Posted: 2007-03-22 02:50:13 Post subject:

老兄好，拜读过。祝奖精。 _________________ 只有在寒冷的冬天，我们才能接近最纯净的光芒。

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Posted: 2007-03-22 03:38:08 Post subject:

诗歌语言清丽，柔婉，更重要的是能引人深入品味。不错，喜欢，问好 _________________ 冷是另一种暖

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Posted: 2007-03-22 05:01:36 Post subject:

不忍触动的诗歌,问好.

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Posted: 2007-03-23 20:36:50 Post subject:

徐业华 wrote:

老兄好，拜读过。祝奖精。

看徐兄最近勤奋着呢,作品多多.
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Posted: 2007-03-23 20:38:56 Post subject:

寒丁 wrote:

诗歌语言清丽，柔婉，更重要的是能引人深入品味。
不错，喜欢，问好

握手,请多批.
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Posted: 2007-03-23 20:43:20 Post subject:

[quote="三色堇"]不忍触动的诗歌,问好.[/quote 握手,三色堇斑,希望多交流批评. _________________ 联系地址: 215500 江苏省常熟市地方志办公室浦君芝

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