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颜色之上（组诗）

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection

Posted: 2008-01-29 19:04:10 Post subject: 颜色之上（组诗）

颜色之上（组诗）《指纹的黄》我确定，颜色的低处土地指向另一种行走，譬如花在脚边，而我在画面之外抬眼，任金发和手臂向下无法找到膝盖的声响，找到线条和骨头的红。不再描绘灰尘绿叶，渐深的容颜玫瑰与传说仅一线之隔。心中的姿势和指纹的黄，在水意到来之前漫过背景《远方的草地》电话一端，我把远方想像成风，思绪和一盏红烛，照亮你弯的睫毛，小小的惊喜而我，画一轮月任风，吹向思念该怎样描述一朵鲜红，描述一个亲密的动作，和心里的火北方以北的土地上，身欲转落花，已飘满肩头《兰色之上》虚构文字之前，我在一朵花上想象兰色，蝴蝶想象海边温柔的风。骨骼里的红逐渐还原，然后学着从第一颗牙齿数起往事。任窗外的琴音雪花，一片片飘起此岸越远，彼岸越近握紧双手，从一个手心到另一个手心的，是我的思绪我的飞舞。打开有心事依次绽放把冬季放在眉头，红痣便延续在视线之外。庄子的羽化和天空，在我眼中已是经年的花开

佳忆
童生

Joined: 14 Jan 2008
Posts: 96

佳忆Collection

Posted: 2008-01-29 20:19:01 Post subject:

真好, 问好赵福治...喜欢你的字...这组真漂亮.... _________________ 我只说三句话,加上上面的一句,我的话说完了

刘雨萍
秀才

Joined: 25 Jan 2007
Posts: 226
Location: Houston, TX. U.S.A
刘雨萍Collection

Posted: 2008-01-29 20:50:39 Post subject:

喜欢这首《蓝色之上》，飘逸的诗句。 _________________ 隔海抒情

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2008-01-29 21:06:50 Post subject:

福治兄很忙啊，最近很少望到你。欣赏这一组。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

半溪明月
榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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Posted: 2008-01-29 23:02:13 Post subject:

《兰色之上》虚构文字之前，我在一朵花上想象兰色，蝴蝶想象海边温柔的风。骨骼里的红逐渐还原，然后学着从第一颗牙齿数起往事。任窗外的琴音雪花，一片片飘起此岸越远，彼岸越近握紧双手，从一个手心到另一个手心的，是我的思绪我的飞舞。打开有心事依次绽放把冬季放在眉头，红痣便延续在视线之外。庄子的羽化和天空，在我眼中已是经年的花开美的享受~问好福治老师!

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection

Posted: 2008-01-29 23:22:18 Post subject:

朋友们多批评.

山城子
榜眼

Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 4771
Location: 中国贵州
山城子Collection

Posted: 2008-02-02 05:08:16 Post subject:

《远方的草地》电话一端，我把远方想像成风，思绪和一盏红烛，照亮你弯的睫毛，小小的惊喜而我，画一轮月任风，吹向思念该怎样描述一朵鲜红，描述一个亲密的动作，和心里的火北方以北的土地上，身欲转落花，已飘满肩头喜欢！学习！春节快乐！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

陈晓霞
童生

Joined: 04 Aug 2007
Posts: 9
Location: 上海市
陈晓霞Collection

Posted: 2008-02-02 05:11:07 Post subject:

灵动,新颖而有张力......问好! _________________ 写诗不是职业,而是一种养性休闲的方式,是灵魂栖息的另一种形式.

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
赵福治Collection

Posted: 2008-02-02 05:54:31 Post subject:

因用:写诗不是职业,而是一种养性休闲的方式,是灵魂栖息的另一种形式.

wq0066
秀才

Joined: 01 Jun 2008
Posts: 126
Location: 中国重庆
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Posted: 2008-06-13 16:33:52 Post subject:

美的享受... _________________ 天边云一朵苍海粟一粒云儿朵朵随风飘粟儿粒粒满山崖

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