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在鹅城的日子
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PostPosted: 2008-01-25 21:46:25    Post subject: 在鹅城的日子 Reply with quote

初到鹅城,红红绿绿的灯如睁着的眼,打量着我这张陌生的面孔。一排排鳞次栉比的建筑,威严的板着我小学老师的面孔,让我忽然想起回家,想起故土上为我开启的吊脚楼,想起为我沐浴的清溪和妈妈的呼唤。

在表哥的安排下,我很快就找到了昔日同学坚。坚先我几年走出鄂西乡下,在一家港资电子厂做部门主管。

坚每次跟我在一起,总是唾沫横飞的大侃他几年的发迹史。谈女人是衣裳(如今他换了好几件),谈卡拉灯红酒绿中最隐蔽的交易,谈钱,说男儿有钱就有世界。全然不像当初在学校文学社,那时,他见了女孩子就要眼脸红。久而久之,觉得我们之间已隔了一条河。以后的日子不在找他。

做建筑行业的庆就在这时向我走来,庆是我一个村子上的,按辈该叫我叔。庆这些年火气旺,承包了几家大型厂房的建筑,每次相聚,庆总是不理我的固执硬拽了我骑上摩托去酒吧,一顿夜宵吃过,总是庆老板派头十足地拍出一些钱。

这样去了几次,总觉得欠了庆的人情。就积攒了一夜开销的钱,请庆,可庆却说:还是我做东,你十天半月加起来,也只挣这几个钱。一点“湿湿碎”,不要老是放在心上。

接下来就认识了枚,枚也是湖北恩施老乡。枚碰巧在我谋生的写字楼斜对面的餐厅做事,在这之前,枚读过我在州报发的一些豆腐块文章,枚碰巧便是文友安的妹妹。

同枚相处很能谈得来,枚很纯,不属于那种平庸实惠靠青春吃饭的女孩子。所以一闲下来,就去她那儿坐坐,有一次我去找枚,正碰上她跟男友在一起,她将我介绍给她的男友,却让我又一次感受了红绿灯般冷漠的眼神。于是不再找枚。

从此工作之余,我就在四周卡拉OK喧嚣的缝隙,安一方自己的书桌。读读心爱的杂志,写写自慰的文字。人寂夜静时,便徘徊于街头湖畔,品味着这新鲜~忙碌而充实的都市生活。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-25 21:47:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

一篇旧作,支持一下!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-25 22:32:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

从大山走向城市的一群年轻人。。。读后,更能感觉出溪语能坚守心灵绿地的可贵啦!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-26 07:49:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
从大山走向城市的一群年轻人。。。读后,更能感觉出溪语能坚守心灵绿地的可贵啦!

呵呵,谢啦!溪语只能说点小溪的语言啦!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-27 17:23:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

真实、感人。如要更好,似可再细节些。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-28 07:26:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
真实、感人。如要更好,似可再细节些。

收到!
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