非马
秀才
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 Posted: 2008-01-24 17:33:00 Post subject: 蚊虫的蛙颂 |
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蚊虫的蛙颂
用温软湿润的舌头
设一个肉感的陷阱
等我
一不小心跌入
让我惊喜发现
自己
竟是一只
美味的猎物
这是《非马艺术世界》网站2008年2月的〈每月双语一诗〉。欢迎有兴趣的朋友们前往该站(http://wmarr9.home.comcast.net/bmz.htm) 读它的英文版。
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白水
大学士
Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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| Posted: 2008-01-24 19:02:40 Post subject: |
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绝 
欣赏非马老师的诗歌, 常用而简洁的文字写出新颖而深刻的意境. 学习了. |
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nobody
进士出身
Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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| Posted: 2008-01-24 19:11:10 Post subject: |
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短但完整。易懂但新颖深刻。
这种诗歌应大力推广。谢非老师分享 
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I'm nobody! Who are you? |
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杯中冲浪
进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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半溪明月
榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
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| Posted: 2008-01-25 03:12:29 Post subject: |
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| 深刻耐读～ |
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沙漠
秀才
Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
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| Posted: 2008-01-25 04:49:07 Post subject: |
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巧妙的构思!
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非马
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Joined: 22 Jun 2006
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蔡宁1
童生
Joined: 14 Jan 2008
Posts: 43
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| Posted: 2008-01-25 15:08:13 Post subject: |
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| 意象的意蕴扣入理性！ 问好! |
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溪语
秀才
Joined: 16 Mar 2007
Posts: 509
Location: 中国恩施
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| Posted: 2008-01-25 21:05:37 Post subject: |
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另一种视觉!
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溪语的博客:家住鄂西 |
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荷梦
进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2826
Location: 湖北，黄梅
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| Posted: 2008-01-25 22:47:35 Post subject: |
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| 换一种视角，世间便没有悲了。 |
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