悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-16 20:08:34 Post subject: 冬●雪 (落尘诗社后) |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-16 21:33:54 Post subject: |
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我拿钱来了,提供大家个方便。
冬●雪 BY 悠子
盘根错节的日子里
谁的脚步,在风中飘过红墙
走入季节的最深处
寂赖在冬天的冰凉
枯木,漂浮在水岸
只有那一截梅香,浪漫了心怀
雪中的琴声悠扬
一棵树吐露芳华, 在旷野
等待一次邂逅相遇 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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手套 童生
Joined: 23 Dec 2007 Posts: 8
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Posted: 2008-01-16 21:50:47 Post subject: |
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谁的脚步,在风中飘过红墙
走入季节的最深处 _________________ 诗人非乞丐。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-17 04:41:18 Post subject: |
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手套 wrote: |
谁的脚步,在风中飘过红墙
走入季节的最深处 |
您的签名有意思!能否说明缘由。谢谢! _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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荷梦 进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006 Posts: 2826 Location: 湖北,黄梅 荷梦Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-17 04:47:51 Post subject: |
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这语言,这意境,这情怀,只有一个美字! |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-17 06:56:29 Post subject: |
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詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
您的签名有意思!能否说明缘由。谢谢! |
不是说了吗, “诗人非乞丐”。 嘻嘻。
问“手套”好~ |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-17 06:57:45 Post subject: |
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荷梦 wrote: |
这语言,这意境,这情怀,只有一个美字! |
都是让落尘班主给逼的
谢谢荷梦, 问好。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-17 09:47:09 Post subject: |
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悠子 wrote: |
诗盗喜裸评 wrote: |
您的签名有意思!能否说明缘由。谢谢! |
不是说了吗, “诗人非乞丐”。 嘻嘻。
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脱手套问好才合乎礼仪吧?女士好像不用?
想了解这是反讽?是有所感?这让我想到一篇古文。哪篇,忘了! _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-17 22:03:32 Post subject: |
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人家是来这里写诗的, 哪有拿名字问好的? 手套不是很有新意么? 要不连你都觉
得好奇. |
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