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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 00:05:04    Post subject: 新年试笔〈只需那个怀抱〉 Reply with quote

多久了
诗去了九宵云外
我低头走路,吃饭,睡觉
简单的日子
简单地活

"进九"的天
霜满眼,冻满地
水仙的叶子还躲着
我却不冷
不是还有太阳吗

只需那个怀抱
那个温暖的怀抱
足以,抵消
一切的
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 02:41:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好荷梦,慢慢回归状态~
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 10:22:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候荷梦诗人!!!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 16:21:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

那个温暖的怀抱
足以,抵消
一切的


问好荷梦
请查短讯
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 21:26:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
问好荷梦,慢慢回归状态~

明月,这阵子只觉得脑子里空空的,什么也没有了,但并不落寞。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 21:44:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
问候荷梦诗人!!!

谢谢!回好!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 21:49:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
那个温暖的怀抱
足以,抵消
一切的


问好荷梦
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白水,已看过,回复了!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-04 02:00:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2008-01-04 19:07:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 20:38:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

温暖的怀抱
足以,抵消
一切的

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PostPosted: 2008-01-07 00:02:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢迪拜!
问溪语好!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-11 05:22:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

黑!每個人都瞭解(進九)的意思?能問一問嗎?

白小姐特意委託我向您問好,您好啊!))))38
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PostPosted: 2008-01-11 16:37:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
黑!每個人都瞭解(進九)的意思?能問一問嗎?
...

谢谢诗盗问候,更谢谢白水的记挂!
Embarassed 我国农历有“九九”的说法,用来计算时令。计算的方法是从冬天的冬至曰算起(从冬至开始叫“交九”,意思是寒冷的开始——我这里的方言称“进九”),每九天为一“九”,第一个九天叫“一九”,第二个九天叫“二九”,依此类推,一直到“九九”,即到第九个九天,数满九九八十一天为止。这时冬天已过完,春天来到了。
《九九歌》
一九二九不出手;
三九四九冰上走;
五九和六九,河边看杨柳,
七九冻河开,八九雁归来,
九九加一九,耕牛遍地走。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-11 17:45:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

致以冬日的问候!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-11 18:29:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

无厘头瞎讲 Laughing

男女喘气方式的不同,导致诗歌有性别。

足以,抵消
一切的

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PostPosted: 2008-01-11 19:01:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
黑!每個人都瞭解(進九)的意思?能問一問嗎?
...

谢谢诗盗问候,更谢谢白水的记挂!
...


那更沒道理,您寓意整首作品來襯托這詞?還是這是整首作品的靈魂?我都看不出來!一定要用,擺標題也可以嘛。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-12 22:36:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

韩少君 wrote:
致以冬日的问候!

谢谢问候!回好!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-12 22:38:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
无厘头瞎讲 Laughing
...

呵呵,有一定的道理! Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-01-12 22:43:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
荷梦 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
黑!每個人都瞭解(進九)的意思?能問一問嗎?
...

谢谢诗盗问候,更谢谢白水的记挂!
...


那更沒道理,您寓意整首作品來襯托這詞?還是這是整首作品的靈魂?我都看不出來!一定要用,擺標題也可以嘛。


不是,只是很久没有写诗的冲动了,外在环境的寒,但自己的心情却并不糟糕。
我涂文字很老实的 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-01-13 06:25:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
荷梦 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
黑!每個人都瞭解(進九)的意思?能問一問嗎?
...

谢谢诗盗问候,更谢谢白水的记挂!
...


那更沒道理,您寓意整首作品來襯托這詞?還是這是整首作品的靈魂?我都看不出來!一定要用,擺標題也可以嘛。


不是,只是很久没有写诗的冲动了,外在环境的寒,但自己的心情却并不糟糕。
...


恩,文字在使用習慣上的確有盲點。在台彎,很少有女性會用(老實)來形容自己,從您的ID推測,猜是位漂亮的MM~至於您所指外在環境的寒!不知所謂何事?
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