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雪落在寂静无声的烟台 (外三首)
邵鹏飞
童生


Joined: 21 Oct 2007
Posts: 25

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PostPosted: 2008-01-10 19:07:14    Post subject: 雪落在寂静无声的烟台 (外三首) Reply with quote

邵鹏飞作品(诗四首)

◎雪落在寂静无声的烟台

现在请你睁开眼睛
像一个初生的婴儿
在好奇与兴奋中
融入这座绒花包裹着的城市

往事渐次逃离
留下纷纷扬扬的雪花——
在一盏路灯下练习失眠
世界一片安详

雪落在寂静无声的夜晚
每一滴泪水都是多余的
连最轻微的叹息
此刻都变得小心翼翼

雪落在寂静无声的烟台
现在请你合上眼睛
像一个初生的婴儿
在襁褓和乳香中安然睡去


◎冬天在凌晨开进烟台

冬天在凌晨开进烟台
客人没有准备太多的礼品
打开天空 眼花缭乱的雪花
夹杂着大海的鼾声
冲进熟睡中的大街小巷
冷清的火车站台上
月光和落叶行色匆匆
人们乘坐最后一班列车离开
悄悄 冬天来了

每一棵梧桐树都裹紧衣服
身材单薄的广告牌借着夜色
躲进一双微闭的眼睛
灰色风衣跑过空旷的广场
泥泞的脚印和瘫痪的心
趴在墙角边相依为命 悲悯
寒风携带黑夜和泪水
淹没一盏熟睡中的路灯

凌晨三点钟的烟台
所有的离开都已离开
所有的到来还没有到来


◎收到一条短信,说你还在流浪......

有大片的雪花被风吹落
你却一直飘在半空,拒绝靠岸
像断线的风筝,浪迹天涯
时光也就这样转瞬即逝——

多年以后的今天,
当我收到这条陌生的短信
窗外的雪依然在下,纷纷攘攘
我戴上眼镜,却怎么也看不见
你日渐消瘦的身影
有些东西想夺眶而逃


◎等待另一场雪点亮黑暗

沿着你背身离去的方向,一场雪
在静心酝酿另一场叛乱
街灯幽暗,露出夜空忐忑的心跳
每一阵风过,都会有空气跑动的声响
落下,像一股电流
在神经最脆弱的一刻
击中要害,让人寝食难安

沿着你背身离去的方向,一场雪
等待另一场雪点亮黑暗
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杯中冲浪
进士出身


Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2008-01-10 22:40:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

淡淡的,一种哀伤。
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詩盜喜裸評
进士出身


Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 2984
Location: 台湾,台北
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PostPosted: 2008-01-11 00:14:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

现在请你睁开眼睛
像一个初生的婴儿

起句无法说服读者。

白小姐特意委托我向您问好,您好啊!))))11
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