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爱的海市蜃楼/世外

悠子
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Posted: 2008-01-06 15:00:23 Post subject: 爱的海市蜃楼/世外

爱的海市蜃楼到书里的山庄幽谷访过去了梦的每个角落搜索爱的海市蜃楼在你回眸的时刻唤醒，万水千山的寂寞若隐若现，美得难以捉摸心在颤抖中自由迷惑肆意一泻千里的温柔不在意永久，放任执灼。。。不要故事那样的惊心动魄不求是否会有同样的结果不信天荒地老的承诺让爱的海市蜃楼纤尘不染，随风起云落 01/04/2008 世外(看图写字) 澄明的水蒙烟的山几层梦里的浅蓝任风吹云过，流年婉转茫茫尘事轻轻于弹指间，散淡恍若世外。。。很想，与你同来放流在，这仿佛了一万年的宁静与安然 12/12/2007

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Posted: 2008-01-06 15:29:07 Post subject: 欣赏问好

很好的一组提上 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-01-07 02:23:36 Post subject:

谢莞君，问好

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Posted: 2008-01-07 12:48:46 Post subject:

诗情画意, 宁静安然.

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Posted: 2008-01-08 01:03:52 Post subject:

谢水水来灌水

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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:27:10 Post subject:

果然是美丽的风景

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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:32:11 Post subject:

迪拜好！谢谢。。。提些建议什么吧

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Posted: 2008-01-08 17:14:39 Post subject:

在你回眸的时刻唤醒，万水千山的寂寞 wow, 这一眸。。。应该让他去大西北荒漠盐碱地看看 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-01-09 00:21:37 Post subject:

[quote="nobody"]在你回眸的时刻唤醒，万水千山的寂寞 wow, 这一眸。。。应该让他去大西北荒漠盐碱地看看 [/quote] 大西北荒漠盐碱地立刻是春色空蒙~

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Posted: 2008-01-10 04:44:46 Post subject:

到書裡的山莊幽谷訪過去了夢的每個角落搜索愛的海市蜃樓在你回眸的時刻喚醒，萬水千山的寂寞這段多好，比之你之前跳針的那首。也是第一段！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-01-10 05:03:16 Post subject:

盗盗: 跳針, 是什么台湾土话

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Posted: 2008-01-10 05:08:13 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

盗盗: 跳針, 是什么台湾土话

跳針！啊～這不能用呀？

卡住、停滯、突兀、雜訊、這些可以？
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Posted: 2008-01-10 05:49:32 Post subject:

盗盗: 是哪首跳针(卡住、停滯、突兀)了吗。。。怎么说话不爽起来? 累人

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Posted: 2008-01-10 05:56:35 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

盗盗: 是哪首跳针(卡住、停滯、突兀)了吗。。。怎么说话不爽起来? 累人

暈死！你存心累死我？我找！！
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Posted: 2008-01-10 06:16:13 Post subject:

你找

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Posted: 2008-01-10 06:30:11 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

你找

黑！你也太不體貼了。暈著，還真沒找著！發首到俺那裡交換～嘻嘻
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