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《生命》
迪拜
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PostPosted: 2008-01-05 18:18:45    Post subject: 《生命》 Reply with quote

你将走过这样一条无法回头的路
希望,在它的首尾之间充盈
当然,也终究会有一个时刻
突然进入另一条路的始发站台
全新的旅程开始了
站台的站标上镌刻了下面的铭文:
腐烂的,是肉
燃烧的,是骨
延续的,是血

通向这个站台的路上
一个柔弱的身影踯躅前行
而你上前轻轻搀扶
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-01-05 19:55:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的质问~
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PostPosted: 2008-01-05 22:16:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

唉,生命,尤其是人类的生命,对于地球而言,越来越像是一种祸害了。
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中国湖北:文胜
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PostPosted: 2008-01-05 22:47:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

生命是无妄。在无妄中寻求一种幻觉。问好。
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无他。爱诗,仅此。
诗心、歌爱、走路。足矣!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-05 22:58:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

生命是一场为赢得生命而进行的考试。
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 00:32:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

太直白。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 02:04:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
太直白。

你更直白! Laughing

直白有什么不好?非要让人猜不透就好了?
你们两个这直白都不错 Laughing

玩笑。我看关键还是要直白出与众不同的东西。
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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 11:41:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

其实

按照“中国文学传统”

都是“直白”的

中国的作品

无论影响力怎样,

有哪一首诗歌,哪一篇散文,哪一部戏剧,小说是看不懂的

“费解”,是从西方传过来的

尤其是《荒原》《尤利西斯》播下的种子。
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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 12:05:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

这应该是“一首朗诵诗”

按照新诗要求,显然是不行的,

我看重的

是最后1段,

“少年”时代

才会有这样的“质问”

年龄大了,产生不了了,“理性增多”。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 12:07:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位朋友
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莞君
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 16:09:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

让人思考的一个 欣赏了 问好您
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钓月
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PostPosted: 2008-04-27 21:55:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

日有三问,才有进步,难道人生就无疑无惑了吗!?
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