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穆桂荣
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Posted: 2006-12-18 22:36:16 Post subject: 打捞...

* 打捞一天不小心掉进了江里江水汹涌我奄奄一息只听有人抢救但我不愿醒来等寂寥贪婪猥亵绝气身亡自己再悄悄睁开眼睛 * 羽毛一片羽毛落在河面飞不起沉不下它安静地躺着努力让自己忘记天空忘记飞翔看着水里的鱼想象自己是一条船随波逐流 * 有一对翅膀天之广因我而蓝风雨飘来让自己挂一道悬崖小树的风景凌空如鹰展万舞之势如果有一天我跌落会想起友人的衷言愈堕落愈飞翔 * 芽爷爷奶奶入土多年每次去坟地总想看看是否长出意想不到的苗每次心灰意冷一天早晨被小堂弟吵醒听 "我要长大, 我要开花" 一字一板稚嫩可爱瞬间茅塞顿开原来我们就是爷爷奶奶根系冒出一粒粒乳黄的芽

kokho
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Posted: 2006-12-18 22:50:58 Post subject: Re: 打捞...

穆桂荣 wrote:

*

* 羽毛

一片羽毛落在河面
飞不起沉不下
它安静地躺着
努力让自己忘记天空忘记飞翔
看着水里的鱼想象自己是一条船
随波逐流

* 芽

爷爷奶奶入土多年
每次去坟地总想看看
是否长出意想不到的苗
每次心灰意冷
一天早晨被小堂弟吵醒
听 "我要长大, 我要开花"
一字一板稚嫩可爱
瞬间茅塞顿开原来
我们就是爷爷奶奶根系
冒出一粒粒乳黄的芽

非常喜欢这两首，尤其是最后的那首 Laughing

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kokho
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Posted: 2006-12-18 23:02:31 Post subject:

给　楼主　发了个　欢迎贴。。 http://oson.ca/bbs/bmf/viewtopic.php?p=5704#5704 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

半溪明月
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Posted: 2006-12-19 03:26:59 Post subject:

我也喜欢1.2.4 欣赏~

白水
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Posted: 2006-12-20 08:05:39 Post subject:

很不错的一组, 提读

穆桂荣
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Posted: 2006-12-20 17:52:58 Post subject:

谢谢kokho 半溪和明月请多批多砍问好

kokho
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Posted: 2006-12-20 22:28:03 Post subject:

穆桂荣 wrote:

谢谢kokho 半溪和明月
请多批多砍问好

你写爷爷

这里一篇写奶奶的　看看去　 Cool

http://oson.ca/bbs/bmf/viewtopic.php?t=1715
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维鹿延
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Posted: 2006-12-21 04:34:38 Post subject:

物人如一，人物寄情。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

穆桂荣
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Posted: 2006-12-21 05:26:42 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

穆桂荣 wrote:

谢谢kokho 半溪和明月
请多批多砍问好

你写爷爷

这里一篇写奶奶的　看看去　 Cool

http://oson.ca/bbs/bmf/viewtopic.php?t=1715

多谢指点学习了好诗好评问好

穆桂荣
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Posted: 2006-12-21 05:28:16 Post subject:

维鹿延 wrote:

物人如一，人物寄情。

谢谢辛苦

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