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七的几个

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2007-12-26 16:43:09 Post subject: 七的几个

. 《后令》传令官来过，种籽生长花开可以凋谢，音叉在壁，兵戈出锈。机翼下，牛马享受空旷未经我的恩准人民不远行；行我的封赏疆土内有了家园。他飞了一夜，象南风吹向前方我手书的羊皮纸将被送达届时，天可以亮。《入围》临期的生活，良好的黄昏局面顺势打开。宵禁前的下午来人行走在中盘实地，买下黑白双马 160手轻快的钱币赏了仆从。 172断下黑右。睿智勇决的马它要带领新主人劫走另外10目。另外的星辰被前置夜茶烹于另外的铜壶当困意袭来，香花已经煮沸白衣的女管家心碎，明镜照耀她的晚景。这显然悖离了合围但黄昏里卓绝的官子如处子她没有再犯任何过失在短促的时间内在寝床笫294节以北，封盘胜出《小坡度的风》某一类字句自体内上升在积雨岩表面被鸟领走那只正飞开的鸟是孤单的先验的染有暗陈的血色、中度耳鸣和拟人的吐纳它早早失去了双眼现在沉着地抓住了这篇盲文马明曾经教它飞行的百种神秘要义也提到如何利用阅读减轻才华以及侧身避让湿气和低云这仿佛时间的山体愈斜部分溶解于灵魂，部分蒸发部分倒下，重回马明要陷足和拼命的流沙

赵福治
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Posted: 2007-12-26 19:49:17 Post subject:

象南风吹向前方我手书的羊皮纸将被送达届时，天可以亮。....有特点的2首,问好.

中国湖北:文胜
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Posted: 2007-12-27 03:23:00 Post subject:

回七小姐：襄樊乡下人七小姐的诗拜读了。欣赏这几句: 这仿佛时间的山体愈斜部分溶解于灵魂，部分蒸发部分倒下，重回马明要陷足和拼命的流沙 _________________ 无他。爱诗，仅此。诗心、歌爱、走路。足矣！个人网站http://blog.sina.com.cn/ak5hmwz79sytbd0d

nobody
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Posted: 2007-12-27 06:56:26 Post subject:

够霸气。黑老大。再读就背过了。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

博弈
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Posted: 2007-12-27 07:09:39 Post subject: Re: 七的几个

《后令》有点那个。《入围》真入围了，哈哈。《小坡度的风》看得我身体都斜了/ 中文的形上思辨一般是较难的，这篇还可以。七七的用字的确不同。第一印象，当再细读。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

半溪明月
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Posted: 2007-12-27 11:30:07 Post subject:

问好七~ 发觉七小姐词意用的非常活,富有想象,言辞间充满大气之势~

迪拜
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Posted: 2007-12-27 11:46:57 Post subject:

问好比较奇特

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-12-27 12:00:01 Post subject:

阅读！久违了，问好！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-27 12:36:22 Post subject:

哈, 七. 久不见, 回来过年? 新年快乐.

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-27 14:19:22 Post subject:

问好七七。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

莞君
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Posted: 2007-12-27 15:40:33 Post subject:

不错的几个很好的继续问好你 _________________ 莞君

山城子
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Posted: 2007-12-30 00:03:43 Post subject:

问好七小姐！ ——你的诗，总是意裁别处，语裁别致！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

了因大兄
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Posted: 2008-01-02 02:07:33 Post subject:

前来学习.问好! _________________ 我不是树上的黑木耳，我被爱过不能随随便便不回家 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1236932795

博弈
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Posted: 2008-01-04 04:14:26 Post subject:

再看了一回，觉得七小姐游戏文章了。希望再多拿些好的来分享。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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