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一只苹果的重量(外一首)

刘雨萍
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Posted: 2007-10-02 06:50:02 Post subject: 一只苹果的重量(外一首)

一只苹果的重量你递给我一只绿色的苹果温情的眼神里夹着一丝缥缈的哀伤问我知道苹果的重量吗我把苹果抛向空中又接住，掂量掂量估约有九两左右你坐着离我很近的对面，膝盖抵着膝盖脸上的微笑是那个黄昏静谧的日落你说，苹果的重量对于你完全在于你举手向上托住它的时间有多长你告诉我，你越是持久努力地托着它苹果的重量越是使你肌肉中毒极度的疲劳正在枯竭一股涌流的生命之源成为一种阻滞，一种睡眠的力量盘亘在你渴望自由飞翔的体内恰似两个力向两个相反的方向运动着在两种不同时间的表达方式下撕裂着你－－即逝的瞬间和消解在持续后的一切现在我用自己的体温揩去你疼痛的冷汗悲伤象海洋里漂浮的蓝色水母用它带毒的刺细胞蛰中了我我情愿浮在水中不再起来让不可知的将来在时间的齿轮间发酵我只愿和你一起抓住这即逝的瞬间就象Vaughan Williams优美旋律的瞬间只存在于它嘎然而止的状态苹果从你的手中慢慢滑落你的手却依然是握住的姿态　象戟竖立在空中两个悲情者的话语他们交谈了一个世纪的秘密话语在空中虚拟的花园里紫荆蔷薇藤绕着他们的交谈话语的养分润红了他们的面庞思想的蚂蚁快乐地穿梭在他们大脑皮层下记忆的回沟里刺激那里的灰色细胞把往事一点一滴地搬运出来用两个悲情者漫长的孤独捻成一根线穿进爱情的针眼把散落在两个夏天之间生命的碎片连缀起来梦里独自寒冷的身体重新分泌出新鲜的生命之汁　他们的血液循环随着话语的融乳而加快　被自己幸福的唾液淹没忘了他们是在和死亡交谈 9/28/07 _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2007-10-02 10:52:39 Post subject:

问好　好诗歌　！　。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-10-02 16:39:56 Post subject:

娓娓道来, 是诗歌, 更是一种感悟.

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Posted: 2007-10-02 17:20:07 Post subject:

好功力！有底蕴！问候雨萍诗人！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-10-02 17:59:06 Post subject:

一并谢了以上诗兄妹的厚爱. 问大家好 _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2007-10-02 20:18:07 Post subject:

好感悟，娓娓道来，欣赏！

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Posted: 2007-10-02 20:24:11 Post subject:

诗意的思考精彩 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-10-02 21:43:13 Post subject:

非常精彩的创作哲理性很重

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Posted: 2007-10-03 06:50:52 Post subject:

精彩，功力非凡！！问好诗人！！！ _________________ 认为诗是悬崖上的孤松，栖鸟是她唯一的养料我的博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/pengshixue 《网文荟萃》报：http://bbs.wangwenw.com/index.asp

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Posted: 2007-10-03 11:52:51 Post subject:

近来,我的一位挚友一直在与病魔搏斗.所以思考的很多. 谢谢和平兄, 迪拜,月光,还有世学的阅读并留言. 问好大家. _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2007-10-03 13:20:41 Post subject:

哈哈，本来想夸两句，但看到已经被了。就想批两句，但又没找到什么。就问好吧 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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飞雪春风又一度, 新朋老友何日归? 遥祝新年快乐

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Posted: 2008-01-01 15:52:48 Post subject:

精彩提上问好 _________________ 莞君

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