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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 13:41:19    Post subject: 吠 Reply with quote



狗在叫
那是一个狂吠的夜晚
狼狗叫, 叭儿狗也在叫
村里人都钻进被窝
不敢出声

突然想给狼狗丢一根骨头
为它的护巢之勇
而叭儿狗?
倒觉得狗仗狗势了
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 14:02:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

哈哈哈。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 14:28:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
哈哈哈。


喜欢? 还有不少呢.
冬天了, 来点麻辣烫. Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 14:38:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

刺之枚瑰!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 14:47:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

有点意思 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 14:48:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy 喜欢
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 15:28:07    Post subject: 不错的一个 问好 Reply with quote

欣赏了 问好您
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PostPosted: 2007-12-28 03:11:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

溪语 wrote:
刺之枚瑰!


问好溪语, 久不见, 等你新作.
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PostPosted: 2007-12-28 03:18:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
有点意思 Laughing


哈, 合大主编的口味了. Wink
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PostPosted: 2007-12-28 03:22:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

莹雪 wrote:
Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy 喜欢


谢谢喜欢. 这类诗歌因了有刺, 常常是不讨好的.
但生活原本五味俱全, 借个胆来点辣的吧 Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-12-28 03:24:03    Post subject: Re: 不错的一个 问好 Reply with quote

莞君 wrote:
欣赏了 问好您


谢谢欣赏, 问好莞君.
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 23:55:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

辣的才有口味!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-30 01:01:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

不喜欢这样带刺的诗歌~
呵呵,只敢对你这样说!
问好白水妹妹! Very Happy 新年快乐~
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PostPosted: 2007-12-30 05:24:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好山城子老师, 谢谢理解. 明月, 谢谢直言.

给个练接吧. 这是写在我父亲生日的一段随笔, 本想多写几段一起贴出来的. 问好新年.
http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=10333

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PostPosted: 2007-12-30 10:34:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

觉得不错!!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-30 19:53:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

再赏 有尖锐之气 上去大家欣赏 新年问好
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PostPosted: 2007-12-31 04:56:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢喜欢. 把过去写的一些一起贴过来吧, 归归类.




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阅读: 1032 论坛: 天涯情思 发表于: 星期六 六月 10, 2006 8:25 pm 主题: 花椒树下

花椒树下

可爱

招摇的花儿不可爱吗?
她自顾自的撑破了蓓蕾
小松鼠不可爱吗?
却贪婪的咬断了花儿
甲虫车不可爱吗?
今早它撞死了小松鼠
最可爱的应该是MY LOVE
是他
驾驶着甲虫车

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要藏的, 太多
比如懦弱, 比如卑鄙
千万不要忘记藏起你的虚伪
如果有钱
最好再去买一个大头娃娃的头盔
嘴角朝上的那种
零风险投入
换回几个
嘴角朝上的大头娃娃

心情

蛐蛐叫, 醒了蛙鸣
一起醒来的还有
塘边红衣绿裤的女人
她把俏笑抹到天上
你说这是新月
晾干水面的月光
你说这是心情

朦胧

不懂?
不懂就不懂吧
西红柿酱汤的味儿
塞进巴黎口红
今天的晚餐
特别昂贵

白内障

眼泪
点滴小计量微酸的雨
那些耐嚼的棉花
只好用来包扎手术后的伤口
听说艺术家把花儿雕刻成了鸭子
明明看见你把毽子踢到空中
却有人欢呼
火凤凰终于飞起来了


人间百态, 也是一味
Razz Razz
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