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月静思

亘古清露儿
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Posted: 2006-12-18 01:55:11 Post subject: 月静思

（之一）转身，我看见黑色从右边拉伸前世的松涛穿过隔墙的白纸泼染相思的豆光以烟的浓度熏醉自己从体内出发的光芒以剑的锋利划开我和鲜血一起（之二）再遇松涛时，已初冬用松枝在画画群山上放着一轮太阳我说是日出你说是日落闭上眼睛，月色将浓一些忧伤从身后袭来松针上的露珠，落在前额我抬头望只望见一池的微光（之三）送来的太阳花朝南安置，日落的速度过快发誓不向阳取暖松针提着露水坠落一滴清凉我看见一面碎玻璃收集脸颊的细纹穿越身体的逆光折射的角度比衣袖轻盈

kokho
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Posted: 2006-12-18 02:15:40 Post subject:

再遇松涛时，已初冬用松枝在画画群山上放着一轮太阳我说是日出你说是日落 ... 送来的太阳花朝南安置，日落的速度过快发誓―― 从此，不向阳取暖松针上的露坠落一滴清凉我看见一面碎玻璃收集脸颊的细纹 ... 《》非常欣赏　情感丰富　为何我写不出这样的句子　 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

半溪明月
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Posted: 2006-12-18 03:12:32 Post subject:

欣赏，学习~

kokho
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Posted: 2006-12-18 03:41:03 Post subject: 禅诗音画两写　　守望

禅诗两写　　守望 .　　　　　　　　kokho 18/12/2006 俳句　守望叶芽比赛长欣欣向荣此彼望万籁影子忙另类文字　守望在日出的邂逅每个早晨都重新开始拔芽拓根看看树荫是否可能去重贴所有的日光下的过程、对视和汽车的擦肩都在夕阳的魅力爆炸里无踪等到云层转过影子的脸；蓝调开始统治着瞳 .　　　　　才懂两种树隔着金睛互望！ . 也给　静冰　献上一首　往事孟庭苇 http://flash.jninfo.net/swf/m5332.swf http://218.21.78.108/musicbay/flashxm/1921.swf http://203.192.6.54/zonghe/audio/flash/7/071802.swf http://flashfile.ouou.com/flash/3/1123575008ezL54V5eVC.swf 。[/img] _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

白水
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Posted: 2006-12-18 18:48:01 Post subject:

很喜欢一些句子, 形象, 生动, 有新意. 比如: 一面碎玻璃收集脸颊的细纹 KOK的和诗也很有味, 好品

维鹿延
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Posted: 2006-12-20 08:20:02 Post subject:

诗中蕴含着作者自如的风格。 _________________ 散步者身体里面的声音

绝世孤独
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Posted: 2006-12-20 18:18:38 Post subject:

感觉好久没见你写这么认真的文字了，特来奖励一下，哇哈。 _________________ 一步步前行，不停回望渍入脚印里的泪滴。。。。。

kokho
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Posted: 2006-12-20 22:50:59 Post subject:

绝世孤独 wrote:

感觉好久没见你写这么认真的文字了，特来奖励一下，哇哈。 Twisted Evil

原来还是　静冰的老朋友？

。。
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亘古清露儿
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Posted: 2006-12-21 20:38:43 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

绝世孤独 wrote:

感觉好久没见你写这么认真的文字了，特来奖励一下，哇哈。 Twisted Evil

原来还是　静冰的老朋友？

。。

他是我家相公呀,嘻嘻~ Smile

kokho
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Posted: 2007-03-05 11:34:08 Post subject:

现在还流行叫　相公？　。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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