照夜
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 Posted: 2007-12-18 05:07:03 Post subject: 半江渔火 |
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半江渔火
宿鸟呢喃 细听时有点寂寞
青灯书卷 无边思绪几分萧索
沙洲水浅 船儿咿呀交错
抬眼看 弯月如钩 天高水阔
暮春时节 挥袖起白衣轻薄
漫系行舟 依然听见平沙雁落
琴声缥缈 淡忆沙场醉卧
笑落寞 情逝如梦 铁马冰河
恍惚点燃连营烽火
一腔心事又被清风舞破
花开到荼糜剩了空枝如昨
隔岸楼亭 美人歌
书成闲情声声吟哦
风云之后小舟江湖漂泊
花开到荼糜赢得半江渔火
目光尽处 是烟波
一壶酒 空阶滴过
醉步起 斜踏山河
长歌乱 疏钟零落
功与罪 任人评说
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楚天舒
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Joined: 14 Mar 2007
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Location: 加拿大.渥太华
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| Posted: 2007-12-18 05:47:21 Post subject: |
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| 好一首中国风... |
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半溪明月
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| Posted: 2007-12-18 05:55:36 Post subject: |
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| 节奏铿锵，词语凝练，韵律感强～ |
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杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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迪拜
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| Posted: 2007-12-18 17:56:24 Post subject: |
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| 问好 |
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nobody
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Location: Madtown
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| Posted: 2007-12-18 19:06:39 Post subject: |
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象词一样, 铿锵铿锵地,哈哈 
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照夜
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-12-19 06:18:41 Post subject: |
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喜欢词, 不仿也常到古韵玩玩.
问好新朋友. |
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照夜
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杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
Location: 吉林
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韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
Posts: 2558
Location: 吉林四平
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| Posted: 2007-12-21 16:09:47 Post subject: |
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有词的韵味。很好。
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